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Old 01-22-2019, 10:17 PM
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Originally Posted by HannahChen2009 View Post
oOF I'm sorry to hear that
But I'm also curious... How is it bad?
it’s not like terrible but it’s just such a self-insert thing and he hasn’t really got the hang of like dialogue or description or action at all? and like very gay but in a super awkward way where the relationship doesn’t make sense and is built entirely on bad cliches. he adds in locations and names from the series and spells pretty randomly and it’s weird. and like, if he was just reading it to me or sent it to me to read it’d be bad but not the WORST, but this is him reading it out loud dramatically at the end of creative writing for long stretches of time, in front of a bunch of faculty who have no idea what’s going on
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