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Old 01-23-2019, 11:55 AM
Werty Werty is offline
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Originally Posted by Swallowtail View Post
itís not like terrible but itís just such a self-insert thing and he hasnít really got the hang of like dialogue or description or action at all? and like very gay but in a super awkward way where the relationship doesnít make sense and is built entirely on bad cliches. he adds in locations and names from the series and spells pretty randomly and itís weird. and like, if he was just reading it to me or sent it to me to read itíd be bad but not the WORST, but this is him reading it out loud dramatically at the end of creative writing for long stretches of time, in front of a bunch of faculty who have no idea whatís going on
Oh my god you poor thing
When you want to let go
Hold on

When you want to give up
Be a

And when your flame dies down
I've got a


'cause I would do anything to help you shine brighter
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