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Old 03-31-2014, 05:34 PM
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Post Kimberry's Reviewing Thing....

Why hello there *waves*
So I see you've come to get something reviewed
Or else that would be weird as to why you clicked this link
But without being strange for a minute longer...
Let's get on with this thread

So I LOVE reviewing things. Why, I'm not too particularly sure. Maybe it's because I know it's the one time I'm allowed to judge things without being judged. Now don't get me wrong, I'm not full of negative comments I'm just saying that if I don't like something, I'm going to point it out. But have no fear, I have a judging system that took me a whole *drum roll* 30 seconds to come up with! I know...fantastic.

Anyways, here is how your story/poem/short story/anything can be reviewed:

1 - I will only correct small things such as grammar mistakes, spelling, and formatting

2-4 - you pick how much you want reviewed

5 - I'll give you a light review: It won't be too judgy but I'll talk about the plot and characters and my overall thoughts

6-9 - you pick how much you want reviewed

10 - my top notch, best I can review. This will include any grammar, spelling or formatting mistakes I find, plot things I do and don't like, how I feel about the characters (in depth), what I did and didn't like about it, and what I think about in length and super duper depth.


So yeah. By formatting (if you were wondering) I mean stuff like how you broke up your paragraphs and things like that. I'm not really gonna watch out for indenting and stuff because sometimes when you transfer things from one editing program to KidPub, it kind of messes up the way it originally looked.

In the from, if before the question you see this: ~ That means that that questions is not required to answer, just additional information I'd like to know. There is no limit to this. You can enter as many things as you want or anything as LONG as you want, just keep in mind you won't get your review right away

So here is the form:

Your Name:
Your Username:
What you want reviewed (i.e: poem, short story, etc.) :
Link:
~ What grade you're in or how old you are:
~ How long it is:
~ Genre:
How much you want it reviewed (My 1-10 scale) :
Additional notes/information:

The reason I ask for grade/age is just so I can get a general idea of the writing quality. Now I don't mean that if you're younger, you're writing will not be good. Like an example is if you're in the fourth grade and your writing is phenomenal and you're exceeding anything I'd expect, I'd give it a great review but I'm just saying writing styles may be different for different ages. PLEASE don't take this personally.

Anyways, I THINK I covered anything but if not, ask away!

So without further ado,
Byeee
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Old 03-31-2014, 09:01 PM
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This sounds like a cool idea! I'll look for something.
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Old 04-01-2014, 07:59 PM
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Your Name: Alice
Your Username: Athenabrain1
What you want reviewed (i.e: poem, short story, etc.) : Warriors' arise
Link:
~ What grade you're in or how old you are: 11 turning 12 in 26 days!
~ How long it is: IDK.
~ Genre: Action/Adventure, Fantasy
How much you want it reviewed (My 1-10 scale) : 5
Additional notes/information: I will post the link soon.
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Old 04-03-2014, 05:47 PM
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Your Name: Grace Freeman
Your Username: Wisdom Teeth
What you want reviewed (i.e: poem, short story, etc.) : what I have so far of a novel
Link: http://www.kidpub.com/book-page-or-c...gue-2034146328
~ What grade you're in or how old you are: 13
~ How long it is: So far, five chapter and a prologue
~ Genre: Science Fiction
How much you want it reviewed (My 1-10 scale) : 10
Additional notes/information:
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Old 04-03-2014, 06:27 PM
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Your Name: Grace Freeman
Your Username: Wisdom Teeth
What you want reviewed (i.e: poem, short story, etc.) : what I have so far of a novel
Link: http://www.kidpub.com/book-page-or-c...gue-2034146328
~ What grade you're in or how old you are: 13
~ How long it is: So far, five chapter and a prologue
~ Genre: Science Fiction
How much you want it reviewed (My 1-10 scale) : 10
Additional notes/information:
I'll review it as soon as I can but since you have a few chapters it will take a little bit!
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Old 04-03-2014, 06:56 PM
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I'll review it as soon as I can but since you have a few chapters it will take a little bit!
Great, thanks
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Old 04-04-2014, 06:25 PM
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I might do this when I have more of my story posted.
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Old 04-04-2014, 07:32 PM
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Here's my link!
Sorry I got back to you so late!
And you might not get some parts until you read the prequel.
You should get enough info, though.
Tell me of you want to read the prequel, Gemstone Warriors, instead.

http://www.kidpub.com/book-page-or-c...r-1-3000145778
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Old 04-06-2014, 07:28 AM
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Your Name: *Jill*
Your Username: HannahChen2009 (Starlit Nightmares on the mainsite)
What you want reviewed (i.e: poem, short story, etc.) : Book (Crimson Warrior)
Link: http://www.kidpub.com/book-page-or-c...ted-2311143929
~ What grade you're in or how old you are: eh, Ru says I'm 15. Lol, 12-15.
~ How long it is: It's about a million words or so, give or take some.
~ Genre: Fantasy/Action. The fantasy doesn't really kick in until later.
How much you want it reviewed (My 1-10 scale) : Well, how about a 9.5? If you can. :)
Additional notes/information: Nope! Thanks! (I know it's sorta long, so take your time with it. :))
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Old 04-06-2014, 07:30 AM
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Your Name: *Jill* (Again, oops)
Your Username: HannahChen2009 (Starlit Nightmares on the mainsite)
What you want reviewed (i.e: poem, short story, etc.) : Wanted list (My KP story) (Ps, I've decided you get a POV! )
Link: http://www.kidpub.com/book-page-or-c...t-i-2311145761
~ What grade you're in or how old you are: See above
~ How long it is: uh... 4000 words? Not a lot.
~ Genre: Realistic fiction
How much you want it reviewed (My 1-10 scale) : 11! 8D
Additional notes/information: Nope. Thanks again!
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