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Old 08-22-2014, 11:07 PM
Athenabrain1 Athenabrain1 is offline
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Everyone's doing this, and I kind of want to try one myself.
If anyone who's doing one of these and doesn't like the fact that your business is hidden behind this, feel free to comment on your thread so it's back on top :3
So this is what a review will consist of:

-I will copy one of the chapters of your story onto my review and CC it on there.
-Plotline review.
-Overrall review.
-Mistakes that occur frequently.
-Grammatical correction.
-Vocabulary suggestions.
-Things that were a little off.


You can ask for specific things, but I'll choose for you if you don't specify.

Title:
Author:
Chapters:
Link to prologue/first chapter:
Review in comment form or post form:
Specified review(s):
How many chapters do you want me to copy and paste into the review and CC:


It might seem a little harsh if there are a lot of mistakes in the story, and I might not address them all.
If the story's nice, I might follow it. Might.
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Old 08-23-2014, 11:33 AM
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watch this fail XD
I'm bored now
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Old 08-23-2014, 03:23 PM
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I will ask for a book review. Once I come up with a book.
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Old 08-24-2014, 10:59 AM
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I will ask for a book review. Once I come up with a book.
thanks :3
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Old 08-24-2014, 01:58 PM
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Eh, I'd ask for a review but I don't even have a full two chapters of my book out yet so...

I'll definitely get one later though.
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Old 08-24-2014, 02:00 PM
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Eh, I'd ask for a review but I don't even have a full two chapters of my book out yet so...

I'll definitely get one later though.
haha no rush i'm bored anyways
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Old 08-24-2014, 06:31 PM
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Can you review my story Poisoned? Here is the first chapter: http://www.kidpub.com/book-page-or-c...ead-3021150152 I only have three chapters out, so I don't know if you will be able to review with so little of the story out, but I will most likely be posting the next chapter in a couple weeks. Thanks!
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Old 08-24-2014, 10:29 PM
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Can you review my story Poisoned? Here is the first chapter: http://www.kidpub.com/book-page-or-c...ead-3021150152 I only have three chapters out, so I don't know if you will be able to review with so little of the story out, but I will most likely be posting the next chapter in a couple weeks. Thanks!
Sure, no problem. I'll do it tomorrow, but can you fill out the form?
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Old 08-25-2014, 11:15 AM
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Oh sorry, I kind of scrolled past the form section. I'll fill it out:

Title: Poisoned
Author: Cate (or Blue Snowflake)
Chapters: 3 (Chapter 4 coming out soon... sometime soon...)
Link to prologue/first chapter: I know you already have the link but I'll put it in anyway: http://www.kidpub.com/book-page-or-c...ead-3021150152
Review in comment form or post form: Post on the NSP, if that's okay.
Specified review(s): Umm... I'm sorry I don't get this. Does it mean reviews other people have done of my books?
How many chapters do you want me to copy and paste into the review and CC: You don't need to copy and paste any chapters into the review if you don't want to. I'd actually prefer if you'd just include a link to the chapter and give you opinion on the story so far. Hope that's okay.

Thanks!
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Old 08-25-2014, 07:12 PM
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Oh sorry, I kind of scrolled past the form section. I'll fill it out:

Title: Poisoned
Author: Cate (or Blue Snowflake)
Chapters: 3 (Chapter 4 coming out soon... sometime soon...)
Link to prologue/first chapter: I know you already have the link but I'll put it in anyway: http://www.kidpub.com/book-page-or-c...ead-3021150152
Review in comment form or post form: Post on the NSP, if that's okay.
Specified review(s): Umm... I'm sorry I don't get this. Does it mean reviews other people have done of my books?
How many chapters do you want me to copy and paste into the review and CC: You don't need to copy and paste any chapters into the review if you don't want to. I'd actually prefer if you'd just include a link to the chapter and give you opinion on the story so far. Hope that's okay.

Thanks!
I'll get to it tonight
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And what it wouldn't be, it would.
You see?"

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