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Old 03-26-2014, 07:25 AM
Athenabrain1 Athenabrain1 is offline
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Hey, guys! This is where we can plan all the stuff we need to do!
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"If I had a world of my own, everything would be nonsense.

Nothing would be what it is, because everything would be what it isn't.
And contrary wise, what is, it wouldn't be.
And what it wouldn't be, it would.
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Old 03-26-2014, 01:45 PM
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Justin's dreams and hopes are crushed accidentally by Diana
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> Rain's love for Justin is ignored and stomped on
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> Sera feels left out with Justin first liking Rain but then throwing it away
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> Diana is stuck in a muddle as she figures out Justin likes Rain, her
> sister, but then later he lied that he didn't anymore. Since she thought it
> wasn't a big deal she told Rain. Later Rain makes Justin spit it out, but
> to Diana's thought, he doesn't at all. She's the eldest so she feels she's
> to blame for all the mess. And not to mention the Harwks (Justin and Sera)
> and the Poyos (Rain and Diana) go on a trip together. You can figure out the ending and also add a lot of emotion like tears or
> sadness. Just email me each chapter and I might make a tiny detail and then
> you'll get LOADS OF CREDIT when I post it. Again, thank you sooo much for cooperating. Can't wait to hear from you!
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Old 03-26-2014, 04:09 PM
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So, I need some more clarification:
Is that what goes on for the entire story?
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Old 03-26-2014, 06:28 PM
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A LOT of emotion. The days drag on as one by one later into the future they pull away from contact. But a light still shines. All they need to do if forgive. They're brought closer again as Diana is a famous movie star, Justin's in the military as a pilot, Rain's a amazing doctor, and Sera's a famous author. So they're about 13 in the beginning and in they're twenties in the end. The eldest is Diana, then Justin, Rain, then Sera. Diana and Justin are about the same age so 14 in the beginning and Rain and Sera are 13 in the beginning.
Are you co-writing?
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Old 03-26-2014, 07:03 PM
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Sure, I'll do it.
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And contrary wise, what is, it wouldn't be.
And what it wouldn't be, it would.
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