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Old 03-16-2014, 11:30 AM
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Luna Where Are You????????????????!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!?????? ????!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!?????? ?????????????????????????????????????????????????? ???????????
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Old 03-16-2014, 12:23 PM
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I haven't been able to get on the computer or Kindle recently, but today I will try to post the next chappie.
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Old 03-17-2014, 10:12 AM
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Thank Starclan
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Old 03-17-2014, 08:22 PM
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Yay I have time I will do it now!!!!!!!!!!!
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Old 03-18-2014, 10:16 AM
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Good work. What happens now?
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Old 03-18-2014, 11:04 AM
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Quick question: Was the flash of yellow....Heatpelt?
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Old 03-19-2014, 08:03 AM
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It's supposed to be, but you can make it into anything.
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Old 03-19-2014, 09:26 AM
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GREAT!
PERFECT!
Hows te chapter
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Old 03-21-2014, 10:25 AM
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Here is another idea:
Flametail (since he's seen the two together) confronts Blazespirit near the river. Flamtail insults Breezepaw, since WinterClan has given him a mentor, causing Blazespirit to attack him, toppling them both in the river. Icewhisker witnesses them falling into the river, after Blazespirit attacks Flametail. She follows them, hoping to save them. The two toms grab onto tree roots, and Icewhisker saves Blazespirit, not Flametail. The two lovers take a moment to love on each other, and Flametail screams, "TRAITOR!" at her, launching himself off the branch towards her. It happens very quick. Icewhisker hides her face in Blazespirit's shoulder, which blocks her ears and nose and eyes from Blazespirit cutting open Flametail's throat.
He can't belive what he's done, and he covers it up.
But a patrol finds Flametail's body, noticing that his throat was slit. They take him back to camp. Icewhisker inspects the corpse, saying that no rock or branch did this to him.
Goldstar (I think that's the name? XD) and says that th only one around Flametail was Blazespirit.
All eyes turn on him. He tries to tell as little about him and Icewhisker, but there is no way to protect himself anymore.
He takes Breezepaw and leaves. He and Breezepaw have a big fight, and the two split up.
SO! Can this be one of my chapters? And you can do the happy reunion between Icewhisker and Blazespirit. They could run away together, something.
OH! You'd better give Icewhisker an apprentice!
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Old 03-24-2014, 11:27 AM
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So, if it's okay with you, can Flametail sort of get suspicious?
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