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Old 02-22-2017, 08:30 AM
ArabellasAura ArabellasAura is offline
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I think I just finished our arc! Sorry that it was kind of sudden. I can rewrite my post to make the arc last longer, or we can start a new one! Either is fine with me.

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Old 02-22-2017, 02:30 PM
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I haven't really been keeping up with this. I'll look when I get home.
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Old 02-22-2017, 03:18 PM
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^^^ same, honestly.
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Old 02-22-2017, 06:51 PM
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The Erebus/Erebos arc is nearly at a close.

Plotwise:
- The riddle book was an interplanetary gate that carried the group to Erebos.
- W.V. has been ‘defeated’ and is now on the good side.
- Kyle is apparently W.V.’s brother.
- W.V. was possessed, the thing that was possessing him has run off.

We still need to know what happened to Leed’s parents. The last we heard about them, they were captives of W.V., so either we should have Leed be reunited with them, or we should have him discover that they are somewhere else or dead. Since Leed is Justin’s character, it’s up to him to decide what’s gonna go on in with that, so get back to us, alright?

We also need to get Sunset, Echo, and Gary back with the rest of the group, but that’s a simple matter.

As far as the next arc goes, does anyone have any suggestions, or is there anyone who really want to focus on their characters?

This might be the perfect time to bring back the missing characters?

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P.s. Ena I meant to say this on the emotional venting thread but did something else instead so i'll say it now; I really respect your choice and I hope it works well for you.
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Old 02-22-2017, 08:23 PM
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The Erebus/Erebos arc is nearly at a close.

Plotwise:
- The riddle book was an interplanetary gate that carried the group to Erebos.
- W.V. has been ‘defeated’ and is now on the good side.
- Kyle is apparently W.V.’s brother.
- W.V. was possessed, the thing that was possessing him has run off.

We still need to know what happened to Leed’s parents. The last we heard about them, they were captives of W.V., so either we should have Leed be reunited with them, or we should have him discover that they are somewhere else or dead. Since Leed is Justin’s character, it’s up to him to decide what’s gonna go on in with that, so get back to us, alright?

We also need to get Sunset, Echo, and Gary back with the rest of the group, but that’s a simple matter.

As far as the next arc goes, does anyone have any suggestions, or is there anyone who really want to focus on their characters?

This might be the perfect time to bring back the missing characters?

//

P.s. Ena I meant to say this on the emotional venting thread but did something else instead so i'll say it now; I really respect your choice and I hope it works well for you.
What characters are missing?

I'll just add more Mallory when I feel like lol
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Old 02-23-2017, 03:04 PM
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What characters are missing?

I'll just add more Mallory when I feel like lol
Most of the old characters, like Liz and Icicle, are missing.
Idk were they taken out for a reason or...?

Mallory is a precious smol bean :3
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Old 02-23-2017, 04:30 PM
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Wow…I need to catch up. I actually haven't read the NES yet so I keep hearing that the arc finished…which is cool!

I'm sorry for the pause. Like, I'm so busy I barely had time to address this so I'm sorry. I'll see what I can do about Leed but for now lemme just read over what's been posted so far.

You guys did a great job so thanks for being awesome btw
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Old 02-23-2017, 05:21 PM
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I wrote a standalone paragraph in the NES just now, so hopefully this covers what Leed's perspective is. I think I did a splendid job at leaving more for future arcs and tons of great action/drama!

Cecelia's Arc was fun.

**EDIT** Oh and also, hopefully we can start another arc off with Liz and how she did in school. This makes sense after reading my NES paragraph because she most likely studied up a lot on science and can explain the sinister nature behind the radioactive vials found in W.V.'s crazy space lab. Perhaps her school is also where we will find older NES characters… *booyah!*
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Old 02-24-2017, 09:44 AM
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Justin, I'm glad you liked the arc! I enjoyed it as well I think your idea about starting out with how Liz did in school great, that way we can bring her back into the NES (possibly other characters as well) and figure out what this weird vial is. (I'd love to write about what Liz thinks about the vial, because I have something interesting planned.)
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Old 02-24-2017, 01:11 PM
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If there's something radioactive/toxic around, it would be a good chance for me to tease Mallory backstory

Like if in their endless childish curiosity they're playing around with it and spill some on themself, and everyone's like "!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" but Mallory just stares as their skin absorbs it and it doesn't affect them at all. And everyone is like "...?.????...??"
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