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Old 03-28-2013, 01:20 PM
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I picked up a branch that, with sufficient force, could probably knock a person out. Just in case. I stared at the armed stranger unblinkingly.
*you already have a spade*
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Old 03-28-2013, 01:41 PM
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Just in case the spade wasn't sufficient.
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Old 03-28-2013, 02:10 PM
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* Is the greatest smiley species*
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Old 03-28-2013, 02:50 PM
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Old 03-28-2013, 06:50 PM
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I keep walking and hear no sound behind me. I turn with tears down my face, seeing that obviously no one would want to go with me. There's someone with a knife, or is it a sword, and is threatening the group. Even though I'm totally pissed at them, I realized that I couldn't let them get hurt. I sneak up behind the guy, with a heavy stick, and smack it on top of his head. Luckily he crumples to the ground. Sophie's eyes open wide as I drop the stick and run away, ashamed at myself for not putting him in a headlock. I could have killed him. I climb up a tree, and start sobbing quietly.
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Old 03-29-2013, 04:16 PM
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"Rachel!" I shouted, realising this was a mess. "Oh God!"

Everything we were doing was going wrong. But I had to keep myself together. Only one nervous breakdown per day.

"Who's cooking?"
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Old 03-29-2013, 04:56 PM
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I hear Rebecca shout my name, and I don't even care. Why should I. I may have just killed a man. I've never done that before, and I never would have had it not been for this god-forsaken war. Why should I even care any more. My life is pointless, and I shouldn't care.
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Old 03-30-2013, 02:57 AM
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"Rachel! You did the right thing. Come back please. Or I swear I will think of something threatening to threaten you with."

She probably would come back. I mean, I had, when I was at my most insane. I came back because I needed to survive. Surely she would see things that way.
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Old 03-30-2013, 06:13 AM
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I started scrabbling around for things that could be fashioned into a spit. Rebecca was kind of pleading with Rachel, who was ignoring her.
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Old 03-30-2013, 09:14 AM
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I started scrabbling around for things that could be fashioned into a spit. Rebecca was kind of pleading with Rachel, who was ignoring her.
*a spit's that thing that is a stick on more sticks and then you turn it around and it cooks food over a fire, right?*
I see a vine, and see that there are many. Might as well swing across to get to other trees. I don't even care what Rebecca would use to threaten me. I'm disgusted with myself, and I don't think that Rebecca's opinion on what's right or wrong is true *just with your violent tendencies...*. I grab a vine and swing to the other tree. But I guess it wasn't strong enough to hold my weight as I plummet to the ground, shrieking in fear. I hit the ground and fade out of consciousness.
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