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Old 12-12-2013, 05:21 AM
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It's a day of great depression.
What happened? Romance happened. Now...
The NES on the main site is out of control. It is no longer the story we once loved. The characters are no more the characters we once created.
The characters are changing, and so is the story. The story is taken to a new level, and frankly, we probably won't be in it.
So many old characters that were forgotten. So many new characters and confuzzling plot lines that I don't know what to say.
We really don't mean any offense in any way to those at the NES right now. It's just not our kind of story.
This NES is mainly for those who once wrote in the main site NES for the past year or so and left because the story was too confusing and your character was changed, AKA me and Ena.
Minnesota's changed, and so has Saeran. Saeran was supposed to be all grumpy and closed off, but dang the love of his life Serena happened. And then things got out of control; Ena did try to bring him back , insisting in his POV that he can't fall in love and he has to keep to himself, but with negative results.
In general, we are here in a retreat in attempt to brainwash our characters and ourselves, remind us of what they actually look like, and what their personalities were before they were slowly eaten and changed.
~*~

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Old 12-12-2013, 05:55 AM
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Name: Willow
Age: 15
Gender: Female
Appearance: Chocolate brown shoulder-length hair, milky brown eyes and a few freckles dotting her face. She has the appearance of a 10 year old, because she was cursed by a witch long ago, a curse that has gone through her family for years. She's around 53 inches, or 135 centimeters. She's thin but fast, and because she's small, she's able to get into small places. Her hair is strait and silky, funny that she's never ironed it before.
Personality: Fast and funny, sarcastic at times but a good leader. Can stay level headed in a crisis, but her feelings gets hurt easily. She depends on her friends a lot, they support her leadership and makes her more carefree. She's a sweet girl. She pretends to shrug off insults or looks most of the time; some of them really don't matter, but some of them do. And she's been hurt with words before, so is more secluded around strangers. To be a strong leader, she is learning to open up more and trust, be strong, and be a listener. She yaks a lot, but sometimes can't calm down enough to listen to other peoples' opinions, with help, she is improving. Willow isn't her real name, she lost all memory after she agreed to the curse. Her real name is Ivory Shillings, sister to Myrtile. She just remembers Myrtile is her sister, but she doesn't remember Myrtile's real name either. They are really close, and they can sense each other *see Other for more details*
Back-story: When they were 10, Myrtile and Willow were faced a decision: The curse. The curse has run in their family for years, pinning them to their feet. And the two girls wanted to break it. Little of their ancestors chose a similar fate: They'd rather live a poor life with many heartbreaks and hurt, physically and mentally, rather then stay 10 forever and endure eternal loneliness, never to find love.
Other: Willow has the sight, meaning she can see most of what's happening in the gateway, but she doesn't necessarily know where or when it is happening. BUT when it gets to Myrtile, her sight gets really strong and it leads her to wherever Myrtile is using an invisible force pulling her onwards. With Myrtile, she will only see now and the near future. When Myrtile is hurt, she will feel throbbing wherever Myrtile is hurt, 10 times lighter than Myrtile. So if she's hurt so badly she gasps, Myrtile might even be dying. That's how they keep their connection.
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Old 12-12-2013, 08:30 AM
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Name: Minnesota
Age: 13, I believe she was 12 when she first came in.
Gender: F
Appearance: Minnesota has straight, copper colored hair with soft silver streaks that goes to her shoulders and her eyes are a dark gunmetal blue; she's tall for her age and has a lean and curvy build. Her skin is fair and freckles dot her face. She's usually wearing long khaki green pants and some sort of black top. She also wears black shoes.
Personality: She's known to*be*relatively*serious, as well as fierce, bitter, and harsh most of the time, but is occasionally more open and happy. She also has a truckload of sarcasm at her service at all times, other than that she has a bit of a dark sense of humor. She's a smooth talker and also likes a bit of roughness (aka a bit of fighting) and can be a formidable enemy when the time calls for it. At first she was kind of 'that harsh redhead girl lurking in the corner and insulting people' and only stuck around because a) she had nowhere better to go, b) she kept getting dragged into their problems, and c) they eventually started to grow on her. She was always all "Tch. Another newbie?" whenever a new character showed up and has always been fairly hard to approach. However she's less mean once you get to know her and is basically a tsundere. Over her time in the NES, now about a year, she's (somewhat unwillingly) become closer to the group, and is actually kind of one of the leaders now. She's become more responsible and come to care more for the well being of the group-- but she's still a tsundere which is the part people always mess up.
Back-story: It's noted that her past is dark, but most of it has yet to be revealed. It is only known that her brother, Jaxon, once tried to kill her. I'm hoping to have this play a major part in the NES later.
Other: Icicle is one of her few close friends, along with Willow, and she has a bit of a rivalry with Echo. She had a sort-of crush on Miles a while back on the Mainsite, and I'm unsure whether I'll still have this. If I do it'll be much more tsundere-like, as the others kind of screwed that up too. She's also known as the Mistress of Illusion and is skilled at this magic. I'd like to be able to develop her powers more, have situations which require her and her magic to become stronger.
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Old 12-13-2013, 06:11 PM
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(Okay I'm definitely not going back now so how 'bout we move /our/ NES here and just begin again with our charries and such?)
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Old 12-13-2013, 06:38 PM
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Yeah me neither, so yeah I like that idea
Should we also include Liz and Gary?
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Old 12-13-2013, 08:56 PM
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Yeah me neither, so yeah I like that idea
Should we also include Liz and Gary?
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Sorry for intruding.
I find it kind of sad :c Around three or four years ago Liz and Gary were the main characters on there and we had so much fun using those characters. It's so sad that they were almost forgotten and that new characters have taken their place. Wasn't the NES originally about them? Ever since KP was created, they were the main characters :C
*is sad because age and time and bleh*
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Old 12-13-2013, 10:49 PM
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Yes, I think we should include them much more than the Mainsite did. They need character forms too, right? We need to know our characters better, so that we can control the charries without changing their personalities.

The core characters (Gary, Liz, Icicle, Crystal, Hazel, Fawn, Stephen, Willow, Minnesota/ Saeran and Sam aren't really but I wish to include them, and all the old characters and stuff) should all be in this, shouldn't they? I don't care if they're using them on the Mainsite, the NES wouldn't be the same without them, y'know?

Also, I want to start over some things, like I want to bring Jaxon in some time after this has started so a bit more detail can be added to his and Minnesota's past as siblings.
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Old 12-15-2013, 12:30 PM
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Name: Minnesota
Age: 13, I believe she was 12 when she first came in.
Gender: F
Appearance: Minnesota has straight, copper colored hair with soft silver streaks that goes to her shoulders and her eyes are a dark gunmetal blue; she's tall for her age and has a lean and curvy build. Her skin is fair and freckles dot her face. She's usually wearing long khaki green pants and some sort of black top. She also wears black shoes.
Personality: She's known to*be*relatively*serious, as well as fierce, bitter, and harsh most of the time, but is occasionally more open and happy. She also has a truckload of sarcasm at her service at all times, other than that she has a bit of a dark sense of humor. She's a smooth talker and also likes a bit of roughness (aka a bit of fighting) and can be a formidable enemy when the time calls for it. At first she was kind of 'that harsh redhead girl lurking in the corner and insulting people' and only stuck around because a) she had nowhere better to go, b) she kept getting dragged into their problems, and c) they eventually started to grow on her. She was always all "Tch. Another newbie?" whenever a new character showed up and has always been fairly hard to approach. However she's less mean once you get to know her and is basically a tsundere. Over her time in the NES, now about a year, she's (somewhat unwillingly) become closer to the group, and is actually kind of one of the leaders now. She's become more responsible and come to care more for the well being of the group-- but she's still a tsundere which is the part people always mess up.
Back-story: It's noted that her past is dark, but most of it has yet to be revealed. It is only known that her brother, Jaxon, once tried to kill her. I'm hoping to have this play a major part in the NES later.
Other: Icicle is one of her few close friends, along with Willow, and she has a bit of a rivalry with Echo. She had a sort-of crush on Miles a while back on the Mainsite, and I'm unsure whether I'll still have this. If I do it'll be much more tsundere-like, as the others kind of screwed that up too. She's also known as the Mistress of Illusion and is skilled at this magic. I'd like to be able to develop her powers more, have situations which require her and her magic to become stronger.
Drifting down through the water, only an eternity of flames above the surface and only a watery death below. Quickly running out of breath, vision darkening until she's forced to gasp for breath, but it only makes her lungs fill with blackish water. This was to be the end of it all... And then the water started swirling into a whirlpool going sideways, and a silver light began to glow from the center of it, pulling her in. And then she was gone.

Minnesota's eyes snapped open to a cold concrete floor, and she lifted her head to only darkness. She tried to get the thoughts of the Black Spring out of her head, but her attempts were in vain. How could she ever forget the black-water that now flowed through her very veins, having assimilated with her blood long ago-- or, well, three years, give or take. Back then, she was weak, didn't have the power to stop him or save herself... since then, since she found the first cross-dimensional gate, she'd wandered many worlds, not sure if she was running from something or running for something, just... running. Along the way, she'd learned of magic and gotten to learn some, grown stronger, and wrapped her heart in the illusions that ran deep in her existence. She'd also found her way back to that world a few times, but there wasn't anything for her there anymore, and she never stayed very long.

And now... Where was she?
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Old 12-15-2013, 07:42 PM
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Drifting down through the water, only an eternity of flames above the surface and only a watery death below. Quickly running out of breath, vision darkening until she's forced to gasp for breath, but it only makes her lungs fill with blackish water. This was to be the end of it all... And then the water started swirling into a whirlpool going sideways, and a silver light began to glow from the center of it, pulling her in. And then she was gone.

Minnesota's eyes snapped open to a cold concrete floor, and she lifted her head to only darkness. She tried to get the thoughts of the Black Spring out of her head, but her attempts were in vain. How could she ever forget the black-water that now flowed through her very veins, having assimilated with her blood long ago-- or, well, three years, give or take. Back then, she was weak, didn't have the power to stop him or save herself... since then, since she found the first cross-dimensional gate, she'd wandered many worlds, not sure if she was running from something or running for something, just... running. Along the way, she'd learned of magic and gotten to learn some, grown stronger, and wrapped her heart in the illusions that ran deep in her existence. She'd also found her way back to that world a few times, but there wasn't anything for her there anymore, and she never stayed very long.

And now... Where was she?
Name: Hazel
Age : 14, almost 15
Gender : F
Appearance : dark brown hair pulled into a long braid that goes about halfway down her back, has platinum blonde side bangs that sweep over her forhead. She's average height and has a thin athletic build. Hazel has tan skin and a burn mark on her left jawline and a crescent moon shaped birthmark on her right collar bone. Her eyes are green with flecks of gold. She's generally a pretty attractive young woman, until you get to know her, and then she gets hard to deal with... Coyote form: coyotes are pretty much just barely bigger than a fox but smaller than a wolf. Her fur is sandy - colored and is short. She has a dark mark under her muzzle where her burn mark would be in human form and a crescent moon shaped spot on her fur where her birthmark is. Her eyes turn full gold in her coyote form and she is often snarling with very large fangs in coyote form.
Personality: Brave, though not fearless. Infact, there's a lot of fears she has yet to overcome. To hide this, she presents herself as closed off and independent and doesn't generally show much emotion (except for anger) except her brother. She hasn't had very many people to communicate to, anyways except for her brother.
Back story: Well, her and Fawn her born canine - human hybrids like Lupa and Echo. Their parents were killed by those who wanted to get rid of hybrids like them and they were running ever since. Originally when I first introduced Hazel on the main site they had captured Fawn and she ran into Echo and Lupa, leading to them saving Fawn. I think I'm going to change that for this new one, though.
Other: She has the power to turn into a coyote at will and she has "weird mind powers," as I've always called them. She has visions, mostly, but they'll form enough so she can move objects with her mind. She doesn't like these powers at all, especially because they're unpredictable and reveal a weak side of herself that she doesn't even like Fawn seeing. She dated Stephen for a long time, but their relationship was unstable most of the time. She also kissed Gary twice, and the first time was actually him kissing her out of random when they were rescuing Fawn...
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Name: Hazel
Age : 14, almost 15
Gender : F
Appearance : dark brown hair pulled into a long braid that goes about halfway down her back, has platinum blonde side bangs that sweep over her forhead. She's average height and has a thin athletic build. Hazel has tan skin and a burn mark on her left jawline and a crescent moon shaped birthmark on her right collar bone. Her eyes are green with flecks of gold. She's generally a pretty attractive young woman, until you get to know her, and then she gets hard to deal with... Coyote form: coyotes are pretty much just barely bigger than a fox but smaller than a wolf. Her fur is sandy - colored and is short. She has a dark mark under her muzzle where her burn mark would be in human form and a crescent moon shaped spot on her fur where her birthmark is. Her eyes turn full gold in her coyote form and she is often snarling with very large fangs in coyote form.
Personality: Brave, though not fearless. Infact, there's a lot of fears she has yet to overcome. To hide this, she presents herself as closed off and independent and doesn't generally show much emotion (except for anger) except her brother. She hasn't had very many people to communicate to, anyways except for her brother.
Back story: Well, her and Fawn her born canine - human hybrids like Lupa and Echo. Their parents were killed by those who wanted to get rid of hybrids like them and they were running ever since. Originally when I first introduced Hazel on the main site they had captured Fawn and she ran into Echo and Lupa, leading to them saving Fawn. I think I'm going to change that for this new one, though.
Other: She has the power to turn into a coyote at will and she has "weird mind powers," as I've always called them. She has visions, mostly, but they'll form enough so she can move objects with her mind. She doesn't like these powers at all, especially because they're unpredictable and reveal a weak side of herself that she doesn't even like Fawn seeing. She dated Stephen for a long time, but their relationship was unstable most of the time. She also kissed Gary twice, and the first time was actually him kissing her out of random when they were rescuing Fawn...

Remember that discussion about SamxHazel on the Mainsite? (XD)
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