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Old 02-08-2014, 10:17 AM
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Nope! Sorry, but that'd ruin the whole point of writing it in private. :/
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Old 02-09-2014, 03:39 PM
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Nope! Sorry, but that'd ruin the whole point of writing it in private. :/
Aarggghhhh!
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Old 02-25-2014, 10:19 AM
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Minnow's POV:
"Gust.... I think we should head back now...." I say. "No! I won't!" she snaps back. "Look, I know this is hard for you, it's hard for both of us. But we have to turn back. Now." I reply, still calm. "I'll kill it...." she mutters. "Whoa, whoa, we are not going off to do any killing! We don't even know what it even is!" I cry out. "You don't know what it is.... I do." she snaps. "What is it then?" I ask. "A werewolf." she says calmly. "No. we're not going to leave unprepared. We don't have weapons!" "Yeah we do. I brought ours, and they are in my bag. Get em out to pass around." She replies immediately. "We are going to get that monster!" Whoa! There's no we about it!" I yell. "So you aren't coming?" she asks with puppy dog eyes. "Fine." I heave. "But I have a bad feeling about this."
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She cheered and ran off. I sighed and jogged after her. "Wait... Up......" I panted, the heavy spear she gave bouncing on my back. A shape ahead paused and turned around. I heaved a groan of relief and forced my aching muscles to move. I struggled up the hill, panting. Then it occurred to me that maybe my quarry was actually chasing us. I looked around for Gust, but she was no-where to be seen. I looked ahead again, wary of the shape coming down the hill and saw a queer table. I quickened my pace and manage to get there before the figure. I look cautiously around and see Gust jumping from the woods. She comes over to me and looks at the table. "Ooh, they have marks on them, Minnow!" She said, brushing my hand and fingering the white stone. I try to stop her, but it's to late. The table dissapears and so does everything else. I turn around looking for Gust, but she's not there.
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Old 04-03-2014, 09:50 AM
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She cheered and ran off. I sighed and jogged after her. "Wait... Up......" I panted, the heavy spear she gave bouncing on my back. A shape ahead paused and turned around. I heaved a groan of relief and forced my aching muscles to move. I struggled up the hill, panting. Then it occurred to me that maybe my quarry was actually chasing us. I looked around for Gust, but she was no-where to be seen. I looked ahead again, wary of the shape coming down the hill and saw a queer table. I quickened my pace and manage to get there before the figure. I look cautiously around and see Gust jumping from the woods. She comes over to me and looks at the table. "Ooh, they have marks on them, Minnow!" She said, brushing my hand and fingering the white stone. I try to stop her, but it's to late. The table dissapears and so does everything else. I turn around looking for Gust, but she's not there.
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The scenery changes and glints, The hallway zooming by. I get glimpses of Gust, but she is floating, like me. A crash sounds up ahead, and my gaze scans the flitting scene of the hallway for the source of the sound.

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Old 04-06-2014, 03:18 PM
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chop, chop! let's write
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Old 04-18-2014, 12:20 PM
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She's all, then then then Is she f***ing bipolar or something?!
hahahahahahahahaha
this is kind of sad
but also really amusing

You do not even know how bipolar I've become in four months
It's not even funny but it's also hilarious
I may even be bipolarly bipolar haha BIPOLARCEPTION~

I still don't like her
But this amuses me

Man, I really wish I'd saved the fight. I'd love to read over it again hahaha
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Old 04-19-2014, 01:18 AM
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hahahahahahahahaha
this is kind of sad
but also really amusing

You do not even know how bipolar I've become in four months
It's not even funny but it's also hilarious
I may even be bipolarly bipolar haha BIPOLARCEPTION~

I still don't like her
But this amuses me

Man, I really wish I'd saved the fight. I'd love to read over it again hahaha
I think i have it saved somewhere, actually. I'll go dig it out of my humongous files of stuff. If I saved it in the first place.
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Old 04-19-2014, 10:09 AM
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I think i have it saved somewhere, actually. I'll go dig it out of my humongous files of stuff. If I saved it in the first place.
Really? Yes! I have an intense desire to read it.
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Old 04-20-2014, 10:30 PM
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I think i have it saved somewhere, actually. I'll go dig it out of my humongous files of stuff. If I saved it in the first place.
give me the fight right nowww I want it
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Old 05-08-2014, 08:16 PM
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hahahahahahahahaha
this is kind of sad
but also really amusing

You do not even know how bipolar I've become in four months
It's not even funny but it's also hilarious
I may even be bipolarly bipolar haha BIPOLARCEPTION~

I still don't like her
But this amuses me

Man, I really wish I'd saved the fight. I'd love to read over it again hahaha
whatfight? have I missed sumtin seriously important?
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