The Rant About What you're Writing Thread. - Page 67

katchyboo · #**661** 01-09-2020, 05:58 AM

they do that

katchyboo · #**662** 01-09-2020, 12:08 PM

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Originally Posted by Gracithe1andonly

Even with a very naïve and trusting read of papyrus I don’t know if you could conceal that from him. In the undertale verse it seems very...noticeable...if you kill someone. Like, would his LOVE increase? Would he feel that?

He might, but it takes more than one EXP to gain LOVE, doesn't it? And at the start of the game, there's not really anything there to indicate you're actually killing them. He might not know what it means. And, also, he's really strong, surely he'd have to have gained LOVE at some point?

Gracithe1andonly · #**663** 02-05-2020, 11:02 PM

Depends if LOVE is the only way to become strong. And though you're right that Papyrus might not understand what it means, I feel like his instincts are good enough that he'd be deterred from fighting a human again

katchyboo · #**664** 04-01-2020, 11:06 AM

gay sirens yay

Gracithe1andonly · #**665** 04-02-2020, 02:09 PM

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Originally Posted by katchyboo

gay sirens yay

but do the sirens sing to dubstep?

Gracithe1andonly · #**666** 04-02-2020, 02:11 PM

I gave up on Parable again. I looked at all I had to do for school and thought to myself, I need my desk back. So I took all my papers and notebooks and made them into a stack and put them on the floor, knowing this meant I'd have to consciously decide to reactivate my writing brain. could have cried. i want to finish parable while covid is reigning

Gracithe1andonly · #**667** 04-03-2020, 10:05 PM

tfw you made two different characters with the same name in two totally different stories, but because one of them is a total jerk you block the existence of the other one temporarily from your memory and when you try to remember his name later you cant until u look through the character lists ://

their names are both jack, one is a jerk the other is a child who ostensibly hasn't had the opportunity to be a jerk on purpose yet

maybe I need to change the child's name
dang, son, my homeslice, jack paper my boi, you've ruined three (3) boys' lives now and one of them is a minor character from a completely different story, congrats

Garrett · #**668** 04-23-2020, 01:32 AM

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Originally Posted by Gracithe1andonly

tfw you made two different characters with the same name in two totally different stories, but because one of them is a total jerk you block the existence of the other one temporarily from your memory and when you try to remember his name later you cant until u look through the character lists ://

their names are both jack, one is a jerk the other is a child who ostensibly hasn't had the opportunity to be a jerk on purpose yet

maybe I need to change the child's name
dang, son, my homeslice, jack paper my boi, you've ruined three (3) boys' lives now and one of them is a minor character from a completely different story, congrats

please email me back lol
I didn't know you were still active on here but if you see this there's a good chance I'm not gonna look back on Kidpub for like 2 months so please email me snow
I finished the 5th draft of Daughter of Light and I've started sending it out to agents (eek) and I would love it, if you have the time, if you would read it. you don't need to feel obligated to, obviously, but if you're interested I'll send it to you.

Syafai · #**669** 04-24-2020, 01:59 AM

ok, yeah. hi.
I don't write as much as I used to.

It's kind of funny how most of what I wrote two years ago, in 2018, which is when I was last active, was about gay 11-year-old detectives and space (aliens, especially were sort of my thing). Yeah, nothing like that anymore.

Now, I for the past few months have been trying to get my keyboard more used to typing for hours on end. I am writing again, just not on here.

I will think about putting a link somewhere to the websites I am extremely active writing on, if anyone is interested. This isn't said with pride, but if I do this, don't be surprised if you're offended by something. I have a pretty big mouth. Confront me for my words, I deserve it.

It will take me a while to think about though, since I made it clear in my signature that I said a lot of edgy shit when I was younger and I do not want to be associated with that anymore. It's just not me. I'm not going to specify on anything, but I may have told lies. I may have offended the people in ways I can't imagine doing again (note: I mean direct, intended offense to a certain community in specific)

I'll update this 'rant' with info on the more juicy stuff I'm writing soon.

edit:

Ok so I've been writing just small unfinished descriptions of made-up scenarios that pop up in my head. I also wrote a character last night and I'm really proud of him lol. That's basically all it is.

Gracithe1andonly · #**670** 04-24-2020, 10:12 PM

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Originally Posted by Syafai

ok, yeah. hi.
I don't write as much as I used to.

It's kind of funny how most of what I wrote two years ago, in 2018, which is when I was last active, was about gay 11-year-old detectives and space (aliens, especially were sort of my thing). Yeah, nothing like that anymore.

Now, I for the past few months have been trying to get my keyboard more used to typing for hours on end. I am writing again, just not on here.

I will think about putting a link somewhere to the websites I am extremely active writing on, if anyone is interested. This isn't said with pride, but if I do this, don't be surprised if you're offended by something. I have a pretty big mouth. Confront me for my words, I deserve it.

It will take me a while to think about though, since I made it clear in my signature that I said a lot of edgy shit when I was younger and I do not want to be associated with that anymore. It's just not me. I'm not going to specify on anything, but I may have told lies. I may have offended the people in ways I can't imagine doing again (note: I mean direct, intended offense to a certain community in specific)

I'll update this 'rant' with info on the more juicy stuff I'm writing soon.

edit:

Ok so I've been writing just small unfinished descriptions of made-up scenarios that pop up in my head. I also wrote a character last night and I'm really proud of him lol. That's basically all it is.

Hi, kiddo. Welcome back. Remember me? Do you still go by Sy or Sumayyah?

WHO'S THE CHARACTER YOU WERE WRITING I WANT DETAILS

Thinking a lot about your change and my lack thereof over these years. hmu if you come back to KidPub and want to hear a maudlin rant from an adult whose adulthood is solely legal and has not yet been accepted.