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Old 10-28-2017, 04:50 PM
alemye10 alemye10 is offline
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I shall introduce a new idea today! It is called Shorter Writing Suggestions or SWS!

Let me explain. Sometimes when Iím writing, I just want to know how a certain paragraph or two sounds. Sometimes maybe even a sentence! And you canít really post that on the NSP. Now, if itís a chapter you can post it on the main site. But shorter stuff, like a few paragraphs or a few sentences can be posted here.

The point of this is that someone might see your post and give POSITIVE feedback on it. IMPORTANT!!!ó that does notttt mean you can'tttt give edits and fixes as a part of your feedback. Just say it in a positive manner and you donít only have have to say positive things.

Iíll give you an example(Iím using random names!):

Jeff: Bob tried to grasp his hands on the facts. Suddenly, in 4.2 secondes, his whole world had fell apart. A slow guilty feeling crept up upon him, causing a severe headache.

Because of him, his family was dead.
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Veronica: Good job, Jeff! I like the feeling that you give as the reader reads this. I will give you feedback forever. The slow guilty feeling could be described more and be stretched out. Also, seconds is not spelled secondes like you had in the second sentence. Good job!

***that was just a quick example but I hope you get the idea.

Thanks! If you like it, I can start but I want to make sure
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Old 10-29-2017, 12:39 AM
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this seems like a cool idea
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Old 10-29-2017, 09:45 AM
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this seems like a cool idea
Thank you!
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