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Old 03-17-2013, 03:34 PM
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Ok, I got an idea! *reels in idea*
We could each do an alternating verse, like having a conversation, except poetry. Like I kind of noticed our signatures are sort of communicating with each other. Heh. I'm weird.
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Old 03-17-2013, 03:38 PM
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How bout being barefoot? Like in all kinds of weather.
Like emotions, senses, details and such. I'll start with a brainstorm for that:
Smoothe sand
Shifts beneath bare feet
Cushioning each toe as it sinks down
Cool water
Laps across, under, beside
Salty foam tickling between toes
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Old 03-17-2013, 03:39 PM
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Ok, I got an idea! *reels in idea*
We could each do an alternating verse, like having a conversation, except poetry. Like I kind of noticed our signatures are sort of communicating with each other. Heh. I'm weird.
Not weird; brilliant! Let's try it!!!!!
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Old 03-17-2013, 03:41 PM
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I'm so weird. I'm watching you guys. XD
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Old 03-17-2013, 03:41 PM
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All around in this beautiful storm,
the sky comes crashing all around
I'll scream and cloud the atmosphere with my thoughts,

(I'm brainstorming, feel free to critique. I dunno. I'm bored.)

Dance in the rain for me,
Laugh in the rain for me,
Walk barefoot in the rain for me,
see where our footsteps fall.

(Yet again, brainstorming.)

Old macdonald had a farm,
and a bunch of cows,
they were polka-dotted,
black and white,
and with them they went moo, moo,
moo, moo, moo,
the itsy bitsy cows rain up the water spout,
the first cow fell and washed the rest of them out,
now the cows are dead.
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Old 03-17-2013, 03:43 PM
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I'm so weird. I'm watching you guys. XD
... O_____O
xD
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Old 03-17-2013, 03:44 PM
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Ellie? You still here????????
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Old 03-17-2013, 03:45 PM
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... O_____O
xD
HEHEHEHEHE!!!
I'm bored. I don't know what I'm doing. :P
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Old 03-17-2013, 03:47 PM
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Ellie, where are you? Ellie D:
I am sorry for the weirdness/difficulty of co-writing a poem. You start. I'll follow.
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Old 03-17-2013, 03:48 PM
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Not weird; brilliant! Let's try it!!!!!
Ok sure, BTW the other part/poem thingy you posted was very pretty. Yeah..
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