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Old 04-30-2014, 04:36 PM
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So I'm writing something! And I need help! Help!

This is the link to the Google Doc. I think it's okay, but I want it to be better. So I want an editor.

A Google Doc lesson: Right now anyone with the link can comment and read it. No one but me can edit it (that's not changing). To comment, you just go to the toolbar at the top, go to insert, and click 'Insert Comment'.

I know I could just post my story here, but I feel like the main site is just swollen with a lot of people who really aren't going to help me. And the Newest Story Page is just a blizzard of shallow poetry and twenty-page fantasy, um, novels.

But I'm probably going to eat those words because my story isn't perfect either. That's why I need help. I know the story isn't long, I literally just started it like two days ago, but I want someone who can check on it regularly and give me suggestions. I can't even get these first pages right. Like, I'll look at every sentence, and they'll look wrong. So I'll change them, and then I'll come back and I hate them even more.

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Old 04-30-2014, 04:57 PM
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Ooh I'll do it!
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Old 04-30-2014, 07:18 PM
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I'd love to help.
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Old 04-30-2014, 08:06 PM
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Ok! The doc can be viewed by anyone with the link.
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Old 04-30-2014, 08:37 PM
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I'd be glad to help!
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Old 05-05-2014, 04:55 PM
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I've edited a lot of things and wrote a bit more
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Old 05-05-2014, 05:31 PM
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I have a lot to do but I do spend a lot of time on KP so I should have enough time to help if you want me too...
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