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Old 05-29-2012, 08:49 PM
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This is an NES based off of a series I am writing and am hoping to publish called the Magic-Crafter Trilogy. I'll explain it:

This NES takes place in the land of Ceallohaer. There are many different races, which you can create. Most beings are of one ability group (which of course means that they have one ability), and is on a rank of control of that ability. There are nine ability groups, and you can belong to only one. You can specialize in one or two areas of your ability. And each being in an ability group is a Magic-Crafter. However, there are certain beings, which can be of any race, called Absques, independent ones, who belong to no group, and do not have any specified ability.


Ability groups/Abilities:

Seers- the future
Wizards- alchemy, elements
Alchemists- potions
Magicians- elements
Sorcerers- dark magicians
Mages- mind magic
Warlocks- war and elements
Shamen- nature and spirits
Necromancers- the dead

Regions of Ceallohaer:

Serpent Beach
Coastal Cliffs
Western Tidal Pools
Wavecrest Dunes
Misty Plains
Barren Deserts
Great Basin
Cape Cognition
Frozen Marsh
Flame Fjords
Border Hills
Cascade Forest
Southern Caves
Foothills
Dagger Mountains
Shrub Desert
Glass Ridge
Ellipse Lake
Shadow Jungle
Speartip Tundra

Wow, a lot of regions. If descriptions are wanted on a region, I will give them, but I don't want to write all of them right now.

Okay, I suppose that's it, except... Character forms!

Using my character as an example:

Name: Finley Emii-endi
Age: 15
Race: Ensis-argenteo (a human-like race that breathes nitrogen and is much more lithe and attuned than most humans)
Appearance: dark brown hair, tan skin, freckles, solid amber eyes, like most of her race, short and stocky. Strong and muscled, but doesn't look it.
Personality: serious and mature, dark and pessimistic, is what most people would consider "evil", like most of her race. Really, is on her own side.
Weapons: Bronze bow and arrows, leaf shaped dagger
Ability/Ability Group: Mage
Lives in (Region): the Shadow Jungle, settlement called Bengal
Family/History: Has two younger brothers, 13 and 11. Her parents are very proud of her and love her very much, but are not overprotective and don't spoil her at all. Mostly, they leave her to her own devices.
Anything else: Really fast, and can go around unnoticed extremely well.

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Old 05-29-2012, 09:12 PM
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Awesomely epykal.

Name: Zuli Xaman
Age: 13
Race: Maulwurf (they live underground, and barely ever leave. There's an underground river, so dehydration isn't a worry. Their diet is based on small moles and roots, so they tend to be very thin.)
Appearance: Pale skin (like most Maulwurf), black, wiry hair, abnormally short, and pale gray eyes.
Personality: A bit simple-minded. Curious, which gets her into trouble. Most think she cannot talk, but she is just an introvert. Standoffish.
Weapons: She has learned in her studies with the monks how to blend in. Not necessarily turn invisible, but carry herself in a way that people will not see her.
Ability/Ability Group: Shaman
Lives in (Region): Border Hills
Family/History: Only child. Usually takes care of herself, as most Maulwurf children do.
Anything else:
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Old 05-29-2012, 10:27 PM
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I concur. 8D

Name: Caelo (KAY-low) Elle (L)
Age: 14
Race: Hajke -- a humanoid race, except with longer legs and longer fingers/toes. Built especially for running, climbing -- anything agility. Oh, yeah, and when their emotions begin to go a bit out of control, the tips of their fingers go either red, (if they're male), or blue, (if they're female).
Appearance: Short, naturally stick-almost-straight-up dirty blonde hair. Dark blue eyes. Not-tan-yet-not-pale, scarred skin.
Personality:
Weapons:
Ability/Ability Group:
Lives in (Region): the Shadow Jungle, settlement called Bengal
Family/History:
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I finish the rest later. :3
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Old 05-30-2012, 05:36 PM
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Old 05-30-2012, 09:24 PM
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Name:Callista Ocene
Age: 15
Race: Siren/Mermaid (Kinda obvious..)
Appearance: When touches water forms a long silvery blue tail, Long waist length thick light blue hair, Creamy skin, light blue eyes framed with think long lashes, Average weight, long legs (When she has them)
Personality: Bubbly, kind, independent, rash, hates when people tell her what to do, Sweet, doesn't like hurting people but will if she has to, tough, brave, curious, adventurous, dreamer, friendly
Weapons: Silver sword, enchanted so that it changes form when needed.
Ability/Ability Group: Magician
Lives in (Region): Elipse Lake
Family/History: Has an over protective older brother named Zak, and a 3 year old sister Misti, A strict overbearing mother, and a mysterious father.
Anything else: Is very curious about other races, and wants to know as much as she can.
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Old 05-30-2012, 09:29 PM
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Name:Callista Ocene
Age: 15
Race: Siren/Mermaid (Kinda obvious..)
Appearance: When touches water forms a long silvery blue tail, Long waist length thick light blue hair, Creamy skin, light blue eyes framed with think long lashes, Average weight, long legs (When she has them)
Personality: Bubbly, kind, independent, rash, hates when people tell her what to do, Sweet, doesn't like hurting people but will if she has to, tough, brave, curious, adventurous, dreamer, friendly
Weapons: Silver sword, enchanted so that it changes form when needed.
Ability/Ability Group: Not quite sure, what do you think?
Lives in (Region): Elipse Lake
Family/History: Has an over protective older brother named Zak, and a 3 year old sister Misti, A strict overbearing mother, and a mysterious father.
Anything else: Is very curious about other races, and wants to know as much as she can.
Cool character! Ability/ Ability group: I'd say shaman or magician. If you're a magician I'd say to control water.
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Old 05-30-2012, 09:42 PM
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Yes! Sounds epic.

Name: Aiofe (pronounced Ee-fah, for those who don't know) Cynwrig
Age: 15
Race: Elsiedd, a humanoid race with a muscle composition adapted to running on rough terrain and climbing high trees. Generally larger eyes with a tapedum (the shiny thing on the back of cat's/cow's/dog's/many animal's eyes) to see in the low light. Wow, I'm getting all exobiologist on you guys, sorry.
Appearance: Flaming red hair that's long and usually kept in a braid, large gray eyes with thick eyelashes, thin face, thin, lithe frame that can run faster than most creatures and scale tall object very quickly.
Personality: Kind and warm when she trusts you, but can appear very cold and aloof to most. Cruel to her enemies.
Weapons: Light, silver bow and arrow, small throwing knife. Can basically use the terrain to her advantage in a fight to the death.
Ability/Ability Group: Magician
Lives in (Region): The Cascade Forest (haha, I've actually been to a region called the Cascade forest [in the Cascade mountain range])
Family/History: Has an older brother and a younger sister, as well as two parents. The brother is bound to a female (essentially married, but it's more complicated than that) and lives with her family in the Dagger Mountains, as is the custom with bondages, and the sister is still at home. The Elsiedd leave home at the age of 14 through a coming of age ceremony called the Mael Sechnaill. She lives with her partner (ionadaithe) Reilly, who I will do a profile for later.
Anything else: Hm... if I think of something.
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Old 05-30-2012, 09:51 PM
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My character's ionadaithe (I'm enjoying these cool Gaelic words!):

Name: Reilly Tarlach (he's a boy)
Age: 15
Race: Elsiedd
Appearance: Long-ish dark hair, pale skin, dark eyes. Thin and wiry, very fast.
Personality: Almost the polar opposite of Aoife. Happy, warm, caring, fun-loving.
Weapons: Wooden bow and arrows tipped with poison.
Ability/Ability Group: Magician
Lives in (Region): The Cascade Forest
Family/History: Oldest of his family, 2 younger sisters who still live at home. His father died when he was around 7. Is the ionadaithe of Aoife.
Anything else: Nah, not much.
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This is an NES based off of a series I am writing and am hoping to publish called the Magic-Crafter Trilogy. I'll explain it:

This NES takes place in the land of Ceallohaer. There are many different races, which you can create. Most beings are of one ability group (which of course means that they have one ability), and is on a rank of control of that ability. There are nine ability groups, and you can belong to only one. You can specialize in one or two areas of your ability. And each being in an ability group is a Magic-Crafter. However, there are certain beings, which can be of any race, called Absques, independent ones, who belong to no group, and do not have any specified ability.


Ability groups/Abilities:

Seers- the future
Wizards- alchemy, elements
Alchemists- potions
Magicians- elements
Sorcerers- dark magicians
Mages- mind magic
Warlocks- war and elements
Shamen- nature and spirits
Necromancers- the dead

Regions of Ceallohaer:

Serpent Beach
Coastal Cliffs
Western Tidal Pools
Wavecrest Dunes
Misty Plains
Barren Deserts
Great Basin
Cape Cognition
Frozen Marsh
Flame Fjords
Border Hills
Cascade Forest
Southern Caves
Foothills
Dagger Mountains
Shrub Desert
Glass Ridge
Ellipse Lake
Shadow Jungle
Speartip Tundra

Wow, a lot of regions. If descriptions are wanted on a region, I will give them, but I don't want to write all of them right now.

Okay, I suppose that's it, except... Character forms!

Using my character as an example:

Name: Finley Emii-endi
Age: 15
Race: Ensis-argenteo (a human-like race that breathes nitrogen and is much more lithe and attuned than most humans)
Appearance: dark brown hair, tan skin, freckles, solid amber eyes, like most of her race, short and stocky. Strong and muscled, but doesn't look it.
Personality: serious and mature, dark and pessimistic, is what most people would consider "evil", like most of her race. Really, is on her own side.
Weapons: Bronze bow and arrows, leaf shaped dagger
Ability/Ability Group: Mage
Lives in (Region): the Shadow Jungle, settlement called Bengal
Family/History: Has two younger brothers, 13 and 11. Her parents are very proud of her and love her very much, but are not overprotective and don't spoil her at all. Mostly, they leave her to her own devices.
Anything else: Really fast, and can go around unnoticed extremely well.

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Name: Invidia Vanto
Age: Well, in human years she's about 200, but she's about 20 in her race's years. (and looks a bit like a 20 yr old human)
Race: Peccato, a race spawned from darkness of the soul. They look rather human, except everything about them is unnaturally colored-- skin, hair, and especially the eyes: the whites of the eyes are, instead, black, and the iris color varies, though they have no pupils. Also, their blood is black.
Appearance: Her skin is absolutely white, and her hair is navy blue with crimson tips. It's straight, choppily cut, and goes to her shoulders. One iris is green and one iris is purple, and it appears that she has heavy black eyeliner as well as black lipstick, though this is actually natural. Pretty crazy, right? Well, there are crazier things among the Peccato. Anyways, since she already has a crazy amount of color in her appearance, she always wears solid black in a rather goth style, often rather old-fashioned. Yes, she does usually wear dresses and skirts and such.
Personality: First off, she is extremely prideful. She will not accept help from anyone even if she really needs it. On the other hand, she will occasionally forsake her pride to use others as much as she can. However, the Peccato aren't exactly welcomed by other races. She is also quite bitter, but only shows hints of it. She can be a very envious person, but not in a shallow sense. She never shows this outside. She is often smiling, but these smiles are usually empty. She works with others solely for her own purposes and supposedly never attaches herself to those she works with. However, she is also very wise. After all, she's seen a lot, having been around for 200 years.
Weapons: Twin silver and black iron axes that are sheathed on her back.
Ability/Ability Group: Shaman. She finds this ironic as Peccato aren't exactly natural or accepted by nature. She usually uses the spirit side of this and one can often sense spirits following her around. These can act as her defense and offense sometimes as due to multiple factors they will protect her. As for the nature part, she heals exceptionally fast even for Peccato, because she draws energy from nature. Also, she can get her bearings and knows much about many things due to nature.
Region: Born in the Southern Caves, but she wanders.
History: Like most Peccato, she came into existence into a family of another race-- looking like that race at first but slowly evolving into a full Peccato (was abandoned by her parents at age 10). The way a Peccato matures is that they grow at a human pace for the first ten years of their life, then slow down by ten years, then twenty after that. Here's Peccato=Human age equivalent: 1-10=1-10 11=20 12=40 13=60 14=80 15=100 16=120 17=140 18=160 19=180 20=200. She raised herself while she was eleven, aka 11-20 in human years-- which means she looked like an eleven year old but had been alive for twenty years, in the Southern Caves, then decided to head out. Since then she's learned many things, seen many sights, and been everywhere in Ceallohaer. She tends to call most people little brats, seeing as she's been around a lot longer than they have. Many other races are ignorant to the Peccato rate of aging, however, and actually think she is 20 upon meeting her.
Other: Not really. I'll add if I think of something.
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Old 04-28-2014, 10:31 PM
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MY CHARRIE!!!!!!!!!!
Name: Rena Fukushima
Age: 14
Race: No name for it, but it is a race that is pretty much human, except for they have magical powers and were made from the clouds and music. They are parallel to the human race, but they have unnatural abilities. When first made, the race soon developed into a human structure, complete with organs and stuff. The only real difference between them and humans besides their powers are their lavender eyes, and the fact they are half animal. (Their blood is silver, btw.)
Appearance: Short blond hair, lavender eyes (of course), fair skin, athletic build, pretty, white cat ears and tail. She has a kind face with high cheekbones and a friendly smile (unless it's fake). She is slender and easily weaves through crowds, although not too hard to recognize if spotted, even though she is excellent at hiding. (I'm getting off track....) Average height.
Weapons: Her powers, and a microphone
Ability/ability group: Mage (Her main powers: cat-like abilities like extremely high jumping, her singing voice (which is what gives her mind powers).)
Region: Ellipse Lake
History: She was accidentally left behind by her family as they moved when she was just a small girl. Her cat-like instincts got her to water, and she has lived by herself at Ellipse Lake. Very good at hiding, and jumping through the trees, you don't notice her until she strikes. At first she is not friendly, but once makes an ally of you she is relatively nice.
Other: She usually loose clothes so she can move around, her favorite outfit is lavender shorty shorts, a green tank top, black sneakers, and black sleevelets with lavender accents. She wears two golden rings on her tail, and since she has feline senses and instincts, is hard to catch. Since her voice is a main weapon for her, she always wears a sliver collar and her throat is very strong.
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