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Old 11-19-2018, 05:22 PM
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"No," replied Dapplecloud. "Greenpaw was kind enough to bring some that he found. However, most of my yarrow supple has gone missing. It was probably just..." Dapplecloud's eyes trailed over to the entrance of her den, and eventually focused on Snowpelt. "I don't know why she does these pranks, but there should really be a stop to them. Although, she has the spirit of an apprentice, and she is really good with kits. I've seen her visiting the nursery, as all cats do. If she ever becomes one, I think she will be a great mother."


(I'm sorry if this paragraph was a little controlling, I can delete it if you want. I just wrote, ya know?)
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Old 11-20-2018, 09:57 AM
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(don't worry about it)

Clovertail snorted. "You're right about my sister having the spirit of an apprentice, but I don't know if she'd be much of a mother. I get the feeling her mentorship only works because Rainpaw's so adaptable. Were you about to implicate Snowpelt for stealing the yarrow?"
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Old 11-22-2018, 05:37 PM
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Dapplecloud stretched and stood up. She needed a good time to talk to Rainpaw, but she was already about to leave with her mentor."We do need to look for more yarrow. You go talk to your sister and ask her about the missing stuff. I'll go find more. Come and find me if she doesn't have it."

Rainpaw turned and waited for Snowpelt. Duskclaw began to call for dawn patrol. "Snowpelt, Rainpaw, Nightfur, and myself will head out for dawn patrol. Dewpaw, you too." Rainpaw sighed while Dewpaw trotted up to join his mentor.
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Old 11-22-2018, 11:22 PM
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Clovertail quickly approached the gathering patrol, and dipped his head respectfully to Duskclaw. "Can I talk to Snowpelt before you leave?"
"Certainly," Nightfur said kindly, and pretending to ignore his deputy's nettled look, added, "I'm sure Duskclaw wouldn't mind."
Duskclaw nodded curtly before turning to whisper in his apprentice's ear, and Clovertail went to Snowpelt, who greeted him with a nudge.
"Do you know what happened to the yarrow store?" Clovertail asked immediately, and Snowpelt's ear twitched-a sign of slight embarrassment.
"Are you referring to the yarrow which I may or may not have put in Goldpelt's food?" she mewed.
Clovertail would once have been scandalized, but he had known his sister too long now. "Did he eat it? He never came to the medicine den."
"No, he noticed it in time. He's been trying to find out who did it ever since," Snowpelt replied with a strange look on her face.
"You're lucky he's so insufferable, or I would certainly tell Kindlestar about this," Clovertail huffed. "Doesn't he know you're the only one with the cheek-"
"Stop your gossip," Dewpaw yowled, "we need to leave!" His mentor cuffed him sharply, but did tell them to hurry.
Clovertail turned back to Snowpelt. "Well, did you get the yarrow back?"
His sister shook her head. "No. He buried it."
Clovertail huffed. "Well, you're helping me find more later!"
"But of course!" Snowpelt responded as the dawn patrol left.


(A/N: I hope this wasn't too long. Was my Dewpaw in character? Is Dewpaw a tomcat? I have forgotten oops. Also congrats on naming the deputy!! I like it)
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Old 11-23-2018, 11:36 PM
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(yeah dewpaw's a dude, and he was all set. Salty as per usual. But clovertail is a guy.)
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Old 11-24-2018, 04:19 PM
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(yeah dewpaw's a dude, and he was all set. Salty as per usual. But clovertail is a guy.)
oops gonna edit that
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Old 11-26-2018, 10:31 AM
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Thanks, can you get a snowpelt post up? Please?
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Old 11-28-2018, 10:36 PM
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Whipping her head back to the front, Snowpelt dedicated all her attention to her apprentice and the patrol. "Ah, what a beautiful thing rain is, especially in the middle of Greenleaf," she observed aloud, stepping next to her apprentice. "You'll want to mind the smell, Rainpaw. When you smell this in the air-very faintly-a storm must be coming."
At the she-cat's important tone, Nightfur's ear twitched in amusement and Dewpaw scowled and rolled his eyes. Rainpaw seemed attentive, however, so Snowpelt continued. "Prey is scarce just before a huge storm comes-that's how you know how big of a storm it will be. If there is silence in the forest and this smell is in the air, then you know-"
"Snowpelt," Duskclaw growled, "Shut up. You're scaring away the prey."
Her jaw obediently snapped shut, but her eyes flashed in an emotion that could be amusement, indignation, or a mixture of the two. It was impossible to tell.
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Old 12-01-2018, 08:56 AM
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Rainpaw looked off in amusement. She was a good sport when her mentor tried to show her things she already knew. She was going to be a warrior soon, but she couldn't blame Snowpelt for trying. She was the life of the clan, and it would be terrible not to have her around. Rainpaw yawned. Dewpaw leaned closer to her.
"You know,I'm getting my assessment today." He whispered.
"What? I'm so much older than you!" She yelped. The patrol stared at her and she dropped her head, embarrassed.
"Duskclaw says I'm ready. You're just not as good," he sneered. Rainpaw scowled and trotted back alongside her mentor.
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Old 12-01-2018, 08:59 AM
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Can we sort of plan out what's going to happen next? I mean, we need Dewpaw's warrior ceremony (Dewleaf) and Rainpaw and Greenpaw's ceremony (Rainfoot and Greenmoss). Then we need the fox attack. Just a reminder so we don't play on nothing for too long. This is my fault, I started the story at a weird angle. :P Sorry.
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