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Old 03-10-2014, 07:11 PM
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And how about our own Clans? Cause I've got some pretty cool warrior names:
Lashingclaw
Eaglescream
Frostblaze (my OC btw)
You know, the works
Here are some Clan names. How many Clans should there be?
BirchClan
CaveClan
FireClan (Blazespirit's Clan)
Wait, I don't think it should be like, ICEwhisker of ICEClan. That only happened one time in the real books, in Bluestar's Prophecy. Windflight, remember? So you might consider changing the Clan name or the prefix or her name.
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Old 03-10-2014, 07:14 PM
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HAVE YOU NOTICED THAT THIS STUPID THREAD IS ALREADY TWO PAGES LONG AND WE HAVEN'T EVEN STARTED????????????!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ugh.
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Old 03-10-2014, 09:07 PM
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I will do chapter 1 today. Sure, I'll just call IceClan WinterClan instead. I have some warrior names too:
Echostorm
Flametail
Boltheart
Fernpelt
Berryclaw
And such....
There should be 4 clans, FireClan, WinterClan, BirchClan, and StormClan. What do you think?
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Old 03-10-2014, 09:51 PM
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Posted the 1st chapter!
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Old 03-11-2014, 01:46 PM
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Could there just be two Clans? I find that less confusing.
And I have some ideas for the next chapters. Tell me what you think.
Blazespirit goes to Icewhisker, gives her squirrel and tells her that he wants to see her again: Chapter Three, if that's okay with you.
Blazespirit's apprentice, Heatpaw, becomes a warrior.
Heatpaw finds out about Icewhisker and Blazespirit's relationship, and betrays him when bagders take over FireCLan's forest.
Blazesprit is also the son of the leader, Ashstar. So Leapheart is pregneant with Ashstar's kits. And the only one that didn't escape with FireClan is Breezekit, who is saved by his half brother, Blazespirit.
Icewhisker finds Blazespirit near death in the WinterClan forest. She takes him back, where they completely fall in total love, eventually. And Flametail (whose name is already taken by a REAL warrior of ShadowClan, FYI) is SUPER jealous and wants Blazespirit killed.
Reply some of your ideas. YOU'RE AN AWESOME WRITER!!!!!!!!!
BTW, I posted the next chapter. Do you like it? Do I maybe need to edit it?
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Old 03-11-2014, 01:52 PM
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I have a question. How do I do a cool signature? I think they're cool.
Sorry for my irrelevancy....
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Old 03-11-2014, 01:53 PM
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How many warrior books have you read?
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Old 03-11-2014, 05:05 PM
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First question, great idea! And oh, I didn't know that. What series? There are so many! Anyway, I will send some of my ideas soon. And thanks.

Second question, go to "User CP" and click on "Signature."

Third question, whole first series, almost all of second and third series, and the first book of the fourth series. I think I had to skip a book in the second and third series, fyi.
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Old 03-12-2014, 12:39 PM
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BirchClan lived in a tree once upon a time.
There should be moss in certain places, like for dens. And it's sort of like a cave. The leader's den is high above everyone else's. So there's a ledge for the leader to make announcements, and everyone can see him. The hollow tree should have lots of climbing branches on the inside, so Blazespirit and Icewhisker can climb up it. FOR FUUUUUN!!!!!! Just...make it cool. I REALLY know you can.
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Old 03-12-2014, 12:44 PM
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Hey, where's the user CP? XD I'm so stupid....
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