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Old 05-01-2014, 09:56 PM
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Hi. So I haven't written the first chapter yet but the basic plot is protagonist starts having vivid dreams, and then it turns out her dreams are her real life and she has been put in virtual world for protection. The other world is seemingly perfect, but isn't an protagonist is only one who can help the world. (Why she was put in sleep mode. Dystopian I guess. I dunno. I've just been reading a lot of dystopian novels lately.
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Old 05-01-2014, 10:01 PM
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Awesome idea!!!! I think that is a really good idea (did I already say that?)! Have you choose her name? I have to go, bed time (it is 10:00 for me), I will read you answer tomorrow. I can not wait to start it!
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Old 05-01-2014, 10:14 PM
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I like Imogen. It means innocent, which is fitting.
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Old 05-02-2014, 08:11 AM
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Yeah... I do like that name too. That's a good one. I love it when names have meanings that fit. Most of my characters do have meanings behind their name. Raylin is the only one who does not. Maybe we should take turns writing, you do one chapter then I do another. Also what do you have planed for other characters??? Do you have all of them, none of them, some of them???
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Old 05-02-2014, 06:21 PM
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Well, I think there should be an annoying yet lovable character. And a love interest would be okay. For boy names (in general): Tytus, Eamon, Cedric, Andre.
I can't think of any unusual, but good sounding names for girls. And do you know any good last names? Should I write the first chapter?
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Old 05-02-2014, 06:57 PM
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I think you should write the first chapter. Also maybe Imogen's nickname could be Gen? Hmmm how about some of these peps to use??? I did not make two "loves" for a love triangle, just so I can see who you like better. I like Keith better, you can pick though. You can change names if you want to use them eve...

Very good friend(Love?)| Keith Nebulas-
Male, about 15 -17. Red/orange/brown messy hair, Asian skin color/look a little on the wimpy side compared to others but still strong enough. If you are looking for a annoying yet lovable character he is it. He acts dumb most of the time but is smarter then you think. he hates most sports. BFF- almost everyone

Very good friend(Love?)| Liam Dowell-
Male, about 16-18. Brown hair, medium size, skin is on the pale side. A natural leader. Can be kind of detached at times. Is truly a nice person though. Friends ETC.- not many.

BFF| Frankie Latte-
Female, around 15 -16 1/2. Jet black waist long hair, blue eyes, medium tanned skin, slightly muscular feminine shape, tall. Bubbly, smart, strong most of the time. Lots o people want to be her BFF but Imogen/Gen is. Has a hard past. Loves Emanuel.

Good friend, BFF's love| Emanuel Farr-
Male, any teenage age... maybe any ware from 15 1/2-17. Shaggy blonde hair, very buff, super tan skin (almost looks black), tall, green eyes. A little cold at first but super protective and caring to his "family" and close friends. Can be a little ruff at times. Can be a bit of a jokester. Good friends w/ Imogen Loves Frankie.
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Old 05-02-2014, 10:35 PM
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Parents in "fake" life:

Caron Esty: Typical mother, caring, generous, a little stern. Dark brown hair in a bob.

Ferdinand Esty: Tall, blonde, and kind, a perfect father. Imogen suspects nothing.

Character Bio: Imogen Esty: A positive girl, determined to see only the good in everything. Has singular auburn braid, and is a good gymnast. Loyal to her friends, can't imagine betrayal. Has slightly darker skin. 15 years old.
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Old 05-02-2014, 11:06 PM
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Here's what I have for the chapter so far:

Imogen sat down at her chair studying the textbook. Over and over she skimmed the pages trying to soak in as much information as she could. Tick, tick, tick. Her clock counted down the seconds until one in the morning. Imogen's eyes blurred over. The words on the page danced around in her head. "Twenty first amendment: Repeals the eighteenth amendment which banned the sales or creation of alcoholic drinks," she thought sleepily. Her head tilted to one side, then thunked onto her desk. Imogen drifted off into a dream.


She sat up in her bed. Propel dressed in purple hustled around her. "Subject has mental stirrings," a man announced.

"Enforce the dream creator," a feminine voice replied.

"Dream creator not responding."

"Call up technician unit for help," The lady ordered.

"Experimentalists need technical support. Dream creator malfunctioning," The man said into an intercom. Some men in green suits came in.

"Not a technical difficulty. The subject is resisting," A green suited guy announced. A silence settled in the previously loud room. The woman was the first to speak.

"Send thought waves indicating a dream," she said. Imogen felt a pinch inside her brain.

"Subject waking now," a voice said.

I thought that in the dystopia different professions could have different colors.
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Old 05-03-2014, 09:58 AM
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Awesome chapter!!! Good to know more about Imogen. So what do you think of the bios I had put up for Keith, Liam, Emanuel and Frankie???? Like any of them????
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Old 05-03-2014, 11:59 AM
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I like all of them! Maybe Liam could really like Imogen, but notes Keith (who I also prefer) is closer to her. If Imogen rebels against the other place, we need a fake friend to betray her:

Cassidy ______ 16 yrs. Smart, great planner, and is a little cold to Imogen at first. She has long brown, almost black, hair and gray eyes. Betrayal in the end.

What should ignore be titled. Maybe simply Imogen

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