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Old 08-25-2014, 11:07 PM
Athenabrain1 Athenabrain1 is offline
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Oh sorry, I kind of scrolled past the form section. I'll fill it out:

Title: Poisoned
Author: Cate (or Blue Snowflake)
Chapters: 3 (Chapter 4 coming out soon... sometime soon...)
Link to prologue/first chapter: I know you already have the link but I'll put it in anyway: http://www.kidpub.com/book-page-or-c...ead-3021150152
Review in comment form or post form: Post on the NSP, if that's okay.
Specified review(s): Umm... I'm sorry I don't get this. Does it mean reviews other people have done of my books?
How many chapters do you want me to copy and paste into the review and CC: You don't need to copy and paste any chapters into the review if you don't want to. I'd actually prefer if you'd just include a link to the chapter and give you opinion on the story so far. Hope that's okay.

Thanks!
http://www.kidpub.com/book-review/poisoned-3000150627
here you go
sorry if the cc may be a little awkward or harsh in your opinion
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Old 08-26-2014, 03:53 PM
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Anyone else want a review? I might update Tracker and The Purple Swan after reading a good story or two?
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Old 08-26-2014, 04:18 PM
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I know there is only three chapters, but could you review my romance story, Untitled Romance (I'm so uncreative with titles XD)? My spell check won't work, so don't be surprised if there is a bunch of words spelled wrong.
First chapter: http://www.kidpub.com/book-page-or-c...one-2997150514
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Old 08-26-2014, 04:27 PM
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I know there is only three chapters, but could you review my romance story, Untitled Romance (I'm so uncreative with titles XD)? My spell check won't work, so don't be surprised if there is a bunch of words spelled wrong.
First chapter: http://www.kidpub.com/book-page-or-c...one-2997150514
Can you fill out the form, though?
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Old 08-26-2014, 04:34 PM
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Oops! Haha, sure. c:

Title: It's untitled, so I just call it Untitled Romance.
Author: Meeeeeeeeee! Oh, you mean my name? Well, um...Julia...the last time I checked.
Chapters: Only three. Just tell me f it's too short!
Link to prologue/first chapter: http://www.kidpub.com/book-page-or-c...one-2997150514
Review in comment form or post form: Um...post would be best, but whatever is easy for you.
Specified review(s): N/A
How many chapters do you want me to copy and paste into the review and CC: You can do as much CC as you want, but I already know that I need to fix my spelling, so you don't have to mention that if you don't want to. And you can just post a link to the first chapter.

Thank you so much!
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Old 08-26-2014, 04:37 PM
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Oops! Haha, sure. c:

Title: It's untitled, so I just call it Untitled Romance.
Author: Meeeeeeeeee! Oh, you mean my name? Well, um...Julia...the last time I checked.
Chapters: Only three. Just tell me f it's too short!
Link to prologue/first chapter: http://www.kidpub.com/book-page-or-c...one-2997150514
Review in comment form or post form: Um...post would be best, but whatever is easy for you.
Specified review(s): N/A
How many chapters do you want me to copy and paste into the review and CC: You can do as much CC as you want, but I already know that I need to fix my spelling, so you don't have to mention that if you don't want to. And you can just post a link to the first chapter.

Thank you so much!
so what I'll do is copy part of the first chapter into the post and CC it, is that okay?
I'll do it tonight :3
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Old 08-26-2014, 04:43 PM
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so what I'll do is copy part of the first chapter into the post and CC it, is that okay?
I'll do it tonight :3
Totally! Thanks!
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Old 08-26-2014, 04:45 PM
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Totally! Thanks!
you're very welcome c:
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Old 08-29-2014, 05:17 PM
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Oops! Haha, sure. c:

Title: It's untitled, so I just call it Untitled Romance.
Author: Meeeeeeeeee! Oh, you mean my name? Well, um...Julia...the last time I checked.
Chapters: Only three. Just tell me f it's too short!
Link to prologue/first chapter: http://www.kidpub.com/book-page-or-c...one-2997150514
Review in comment form or post form: Um...post would be best, but whatever is easy for you.
Specified review(s): N/A
How many chapters do you want me to copy and paste into the review and CC: You can do as much CC as you want, but I already know that I need to fix my spelling, so you don't have to mention that if you don't want to. And you can just post a link to the first chapter.

Thank you so much!
Sorry, I've been having an epic case of writer's and artist's block so I can't get to your review for at least a few more days but it'll be out, I promise
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