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Old 01-22-2014, 04:16 PM
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((1)My PJ Fanfic, which I'm kinda stuck on)
Don't tell me you're unnormal until you've seen my crazy, messed up life.
((2)A slowly outlined and progressing story I work on when I get tired with others, because I'm not posting this, so no pressure.)
Given the fact that I'm mental, crazy, and about to be shipped off to an asylum, my best option? Is to run.
((3)A story I wrote when I was younger- the story, meh. But the first line I like and will always memorize- so here it is. It is sort of like my sig- Lena's quote- now)
It's humans, I think. That's my problem. They're mental and they suck. As if I'm not one.

(I'll need to check that doc for Crimson and Moonlight cause I can't memorize them yet)
Ooh, the PJ fanfic. Since I did send you my Natural Forces outline, can you send me what you have of the PJ fanfic? assuming you have it, of course.

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Old 01-22-2014, 05:17 PM
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Calm Before the Storm NEW

The plan had been set for ages, but not put into action until now.
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Old 01-22-2014, 07:46 PM
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Captured Dreams—
The world is not as pretty as you’d think.

Failure's Embrace—
It was the one thing people never seemed to understand. Or perhaps never wanted to.
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Old 01-22-2014, 08:05 PM
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Old 01-22-2014, 08:28 PM
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Ooh, the PJ fanfic. Since I did send you my Natural Forces outline, can you send me what you have of the PJ fanfic? assuming you have it, of course.

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...*le considers* aw come on... Fine. I'll send it to you when I get my files back xP my mom has them.
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Old 01-22-2014, 08:39 PM
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...*le considers* aw come on... Fine. I'll send it to you when I get my files back xP my mom has them.
yay .
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Old 01-23-2014, 02:16 PM
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This doesn't have to do with the first line, but I'm rewriting the beginning of Shadow Realm and it's just eck. >.<
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Old 02-20-2014, 04:33 PM
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Guyss which first line is better?


I could see her, but she was oblivious to the fact that I was watching.

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The footsteps were the first thing that told me a demon was watching.


And psst people who read SR: what do you think of the opening?
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Old 02-20-2014, 05:53 PM
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Guyss which first line is better?


I could see her, but she was oblivious to the fact that I was watching.

or

The footsteps were the first thing that told me a demon was watching.


And psst people who read SR: what do you think of the opening?
The first one
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Old 02-20-2014, 05:57 PM
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The first one
Thank youuuuuu Haha I'm really glad because that's the current starter of my book. XD
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