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Old 01-04-2017, 08:05 PM
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Lol ye, i got u, it's chill, agree to disagree indeed^_^
that is an interesting definition, but then wouldn't the stimuli eventually stop taking effect, like how painkillers stop working as your body becomes accustomed to them? So at some point or another you would have to choose to keep loving someone despite the lack of chemical production.

Side note: the whole 'we have chemistry' cliche line just became a hell of a lot clearer to me,,
cynical me, whispering: then people don't love each other and just stay together out of habit
normal me: lmao i don't even wanna talk philosophy of love i will soon spiral into depressed confusion

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Old 01-09-2017, 08:46 PM
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Then: No American characters (as in USA)
Now: Still no American characters. ha.

@Silvermoon *waxes philosophical*
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Old 01-10-2017, 11:44 AM
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Then: No American characters (as in USA)
Now: Still no American characters. ha.

@Silvermoon *waxes philosophical*
lamo that's basically what my writing is

lol lets see how many chars I have that live in USA

Sin Game: ppl have real life ethnicities but it takes place in a fictional city that is ambiguously placed so idk where they are lmao
Our Kingdom of Loneliness: lol yeah they're Californian (but I haven't been to Cali since I was 8 and I've never been to where they live so lmao that's basically foreign)
Sun, Moon, and Sky: fictional world so like,, lmo no
The Twilight Talisman: I mean. Sanna is from Louisiana. but idek where the story takes place yet so

do I have more stories. probably. meh
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Old 01-15-2017, 12:52 PM
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Old Writing: shitty, but I actually wrote stuff
New Writing: better concepts, but perpetual agraphia
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Old 01-17-2017, 03:02 PM
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Old Writing: shitty, but I actually wrote stuff
New Writing: better concepts, but perpetual agraphia
truest thing.
i feel like i never get new ideas anymore.
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Old 01-19-2017, 11:33 AM
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you duckies should try online roleplaying. 'cause it kind of forces you to make a character and develop them and all that, and idk about you guys but i find that once i have a solid character i feel compelled to give them a story?
plus you can draw inspiration from the storylines.

Before: These characters are POC! except that they have white last names and no cultural backgrounds whoops. and realism? what's realism?
After: *quietly rants at self while re-writing Kyra Nelson into Kyra Ahenekew and having her run away to her parents' band instead of to England (of all places)*
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Old 01-27-2017, 02:26 PM
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Before: nonsense
After: very weird, trippy, but well-written nonsense.

lol I say well-written
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well, sexual immorality in general is identified as sinful and some of the things defined as sexually immoral are,
- adultery (cheating, basically)
-homosexuality
-having sexual relationships out of marriage
ect. ect.
so i wouldn't have characters who weren't married, ah, doing stuff, either.
as a sexual deviant can confirm

i mean im mostly asexual and sometimes repulsed but i do have somewhat of an interest in sexual activity,

which is a bunch of sin shit


....bc vanilla shit is boring so im at least theoretically into BDSM and kink stuff looooooolll

I'm allowed to say that on here right?

Anyways I'm just spamming kid pub bc I don't want t do my home work
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Old 03-18-2018, 11:35 PM
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as a sexual deviant can confirm

i mean im mostly asexual and sometimes repulsed but i do have somewhat of an interest in sexual activity,

which is a bunch of sin shit


....bc vanilla shit is boring so im at least theoretically into BDSM and kink stuff looooooolll

I'm allowed to say that on here right?

Anyways I'm just spamming kid pub bc I don't want t do my home work
Oh, kill me. I'd forgotten about this..
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Old 03-18-2018, 11:46 PM
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"...Until recently all of my characters were hetero/cis by default...I don't think that I will ever truly progress to the point where I have characters that fall on the homosexual/homoromantic side of the spectrum..."
*looks at the heavily insinuated romance between Jeanette and Xena*
*looks at this post*
*looks at the very gay Jensen and his agendered lover, who happen to be my otp*
*looks at this post*

*sighs*
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