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Old 06-09-2009, 06:50 PM
VanessaP VanessaP is offline
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Default New Idea!!! I neeeeddd HELP!!!!!!

Okay I think I have been having a case of writers block. It's been driving me crazy. I have tried writing so many different stories and none of them have been working. I think I finally found the one though. Tell me how you like it!!
How would you describe the color red to a blind person? Well, you can't. You can describe what things that are red feel like or taste like. But you see, you simply cannot describe a color.
Marisol Nunez's brother is blind. He always has been and always will be. Every night since her brother Dantel turned five, Marisol sat at the end of his bed and would describe the world to him. He asks her "Marisol, you always say car. What does a car look like?" and Marisol says "A car is big and made of metal. You ride in one almost every day. I tell you when you're in it." And he agrees. Then one day, Marisol is describing a garden. And she says "...there are daffodills, that are shaped like stars with a drinking cup in the middle. They can be yellow, or white, or even a vibrant orange..." and he stops her. "Mari', what is yellow, orange, and white?" and she says "Yellow is a happy color. It's bright and vibrant..." and he stops her again. "What is color?"
Buckets and Puddles,
"A good writer writes from their soul..."
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Old 06-10-2009, 12:31 AM
De-Ecrivian De-Ecrivian is offline
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wow, yeah, that does sound good, but hard.
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Old 08-31-2009, 05:45 AM
Saul Saul is offline
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Can I give you a tip?
Is that an excerpt from the story, if it is you might want to try lengthening that part of the story and stop writing the story like you're telling it. Just my opinion though, don't misinterpret that

And what is the plot. I'm interested to find out.
But good story though, keep on writing

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