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Old 09-13-2016, 03:59 PM
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Basically if you have any questions about Gothy Gloomy Sunshine or the characters or, idk, anything to do with the story, ask them here, and i'll answer (hopefully).
Also, if you have any suggestions, like, you think there should be more description, or there was a certain part you thought could use improvement, or if there was a detail you found was wrong in some way, just drop a note here and let me know so I can fix it in the next round of edits. Thanks
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Old 09-13-2016, 06:02 PM
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Basically if you have any questions about Gothy Gloomy Sunshine or the characters or, idk, anything to do with the story, ask them here, and i'll answer (hopefully).
Also, if you have any suggestions, like, you think there should be more description, or there was a certain part you thought could use improvement, or if there was a detail you found was wrong in some way, just drop a note here and let me know so I can fix it in the next round of edits. Thanks
what is jay's scar????? what is it from????? also just on that note what is his secret? idk if thats to much to ask but honestly gtk
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Old 09-13-2016, 07:34 PM
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Basically if you have any questions about Gothy Gloomy Sunshine or the characters or, idk, anything to do with the story, ask them here, and i'll answer (hopefully).
Also, if you have any suggestions, like, you think there should be more description, or there was a certain part you thought could use improvement, or if there was a detail you found was wrong in some way, just drop a note here and let me know so I can fix it in the next round of edits. Thanks
Is Jay in Marlin's BC his gf told him cutting was OK?
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Old 09-14-2016, 12:53 PM
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what is jay's scar????? what is it from????? also just on that note what is his secret? idk if thats to much to ask but honestly gtk
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Is Jay in Marlin's BC his gf told him cutting was OK?
Kill two birds with one stone here.
Jay's secret/the reason he's in Marlin's is that he's a drug addict. The scar is a track mark from injecting heroin and he has a lot more, but that one is slightly lower down his arm than the others which is why it's showing sometimes.
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Kill two birds with one stone here.
Jay's secret/the reason he's in Marlin's is that he's a drug addict. The scar is a track mark from injecting heroin and he has a lot more, but that one is slightly lower down his arm than the others which is why it's showing sometimes.
OHHHH i should have known omg that makes sense tho
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Old 09-16-2016, 03:22 PM
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I've decided to post a couple chapters of the sequel to KP and see how people react in general. I think at this point anyone who read it would have already been reading GGS, so probably drugs wouldn't be that big of a deal?
We'll see how that goes.
On the other hand, if there's anything you caught that seemed out of place while you were reading, i'd like to know. Just for references while editing it again. So far I have:
- The reason Ria gets sent to Marlin's is on the unbelievable side. Maybe have both the parents and the therapist strongly convinced that she tried to kill herself?
- There's needs to be a more realistic way on how she got the razor past security.
- I personally think that one chapter where's she's dissociated needs work


Anything else?
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Old 12-20-2016, 10:25 PM
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reviving this thread like a noodle for some shameless self advertisement and also because i have a semi-pertinent question.
question: is there a way to change thread titles? because i'm thinking of just making this a master thread for all my stories..

advertisement: second book is up, it's called black hole sun. it's from Jay's point of view and mostly it's about his drug problem and also he may or may not have contracted a deadly disease, but there's also some stuff (that hasn't been written yet, aha...ha...ehh) about Ria's recovery and how she deals with her parents *cough*mostlyhermom*cough*

also ria x jay becomes sort of a thing but stuff happens and it gets complicated. (also not written yet..)

link: https://www.kidpub.com/book-page-or-...ine-2935159389

so yeah, go read my trash :P
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Old 12-21-2016, 05:27 PM
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You probably mentioned this before and I forgot but what is Mel's last name?
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Old 12-26-2016, 12:35 PM
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You probably mentioned this before and I forgot but what is Mel's last name?
That...is a good question. I have no answer for that, hold on, lemme go look that up for a minute...
*searching...searching...searching...searching...* *flips table*
Yeah, ok, she doesn't have one currently. :P
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Old 12-26-2016, 03:14 PM
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Ok. I'm actually really curious about Mel's family too
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