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Old 09-05-2011, 11:34 AM
TaneHannah TaneHannah is offline
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Okay, I just want you to have a look at my story, you don't have to comment, just come here and tell me what you think, okay? do we have a deal? You don't even have to tell me what you think, all I want you to do is read it!! And tell me if it needs a different title, and give me CC if you want. And it's not a lot to read, there's only one chapter so far. So, do you think it's going good??

Here's the link; http://www.kidpub.com/story/royal-fa...r-1-1921111743

I HOPE the link works, please read!! Thanks if you do.
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Old 09-05-2011, 12:54 PM
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It's awesome! I read it, and I definately want to read more!

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Although the writing was very good, I think it would be more interesting if the princesses were more...rebelious. Like, they have a secret plan to destroy the kingdom or they are in love with someone from an enemy kingdom. If it were like this, I think it would attract more readers.

Hope you don't mind CC! It's still AWESOME!!
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Old 09-05-2011, 02:04 PM
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Thanks camikat!!
Thanks for the CC, I think that's a good idea, I think I'll change it... Thanks again!!
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