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Old 09-18-2013, 09:28 PM
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Ok, so this is like a NSP/Story idea/ other stuff so write a paragraph of someone dying dramatically, it can be from your book or just made up!
NOW GO! AND KILL OFF PEOPLE!
(Sometimes I base a story around a few dramatic deaths ... Like Separated)
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Old 09-18-2013, 09:40 PM
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YAY I'M GOING TO KILL OFF FLIX
HE DOESN'T DIE THO
OKAY?
OKAY
GOOD
MKAY


As Flix stood like a fiery statue on fire, he looked at that wonderful flower in his hand, the petals looking like they were shattering to their own death. He lay in his own pile of crimson blood, finding the shadows deadly. He closed his eyes and spoke, "Olivia." one last time—then he was nothing but ash.
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Old 09-19-2013, 05:23 AM
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Does he turn to ash without a fire?
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Old 09-19-2013, 05:24 AM
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I have a dramatic death in my book...I'm too lazy to dig it out, though.
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Old 09-19-2013, 05:40 AM
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Does he turn to ash without a fire?
Oh in my head I was planning that he was on FIREEEEEE. So.
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Sleeping with roaches and
Taking best guesses
At the shade of the sheets and
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Old 09-19-2013, 06:50 AM
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And...'stood'...then 'lay'?
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Old 09-19-2013, 06:55 AM
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And...'stood'...then 'lay'?
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Old 09-20-2013, 04:17 PM
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I'm killing off two main characters. *cries* I won't write it here, though. One of them dies all dramatically, and the other one jumps off of a building and dies later without a lot of drama.
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Old 09-21-2013, 11:48 PM
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I'm killing off two main characters. *cries* I won't write it here, though. One of them dies all dramatically, and the other one jumps off of a building and dies later without a lot of drama.
lol ... I'll post one.
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Old 09-21-2013, 11:53 PM
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They all stood there, watching as he made the ultimate sacrifice. The moon had just appeared and from the right angle it looked like a halo around his head. Goodnight moon ... He shared long glances with the others before it happened. The missile shot straight for him--his arms stretched out so he could grab it. Just like that it struck him ... killed him with a hot searing pain. A hot searing pain that everyone else would feel forever. Everyone that had just seen the ultimate sacrifice.
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