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Old 10-31-2013, 06:56 AM
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That'd be a little obvious...I'd suggest you'd make it so that it effects her a little less directly, but would still be enough to prevent him from doing anything. Like, maybe it's her father who teaches at the college instead of just her.
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umm..
And appearances and name ideas?
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Old 10-31-2013, 07:06 AM
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Yeeeesssss


umm..
And appearances and name ideas?
For the assassin guy, give him a painfully obvious fake name. (Not so painfully obvious as "John Smith", though. XD) For the girl, give her a name that has absolutely nothing to do with her personality/appearance...in fact, I'd suggest giving her a name that means the opposite of what she is. (Like, if she's blonde and bright and always happy, give her a name that means something dark or serious or something.) (I have this one site I like to use for names and their meanings...want a link to it.) And for appearances...please don't make the main characters extremely handsome/beautiful, especially the lady. ._. Too many stories make their characters pretend humble but are actually unrealistically gorgeous.

You don't actually have to follow any of that... XD That's just what I'd suggest.
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Old 10-31-2013, 07:27 AM
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Goodnight, Kendra...
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Old 10-31-2013, 07:27 AM
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I understand. Thank you so much for the help
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He climbs onto the bed and I frown, wrapping my arms around his neck. "Come to me next time."
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Now I have like a bazillion pages to read
Geez Louise ;-;*

We immediately fall back into our previous positions: her twisted on her back, me curled up right beside her. This time, I throw the first few covers over us, feeling a bit chillier than before. I snake my right arm around her waste and lock it gently with the left, resting on her tummy. Leaning in, I give her a kiss on the cheekbone and the corner of her collar bone before responding. "I Ookay. I'llI'll try it."
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*u guys
Now I have like a bazillion pages to read
Geez Louise ;-;*

We immediately fall back into our previous positions: her twisted on her back, me curled up right beside her. This time, I throw the first few covers over us, feeling a bit chillier than before. I snake my right arm around her waste and lock it gently with the left, resting on her tummy. Leaning in, I give her a kiss on the cheekbone and the corner of her collar bone before responding. "I Ookay. I'llI'll try it."
I smile, rub my hand up and down his arm. "Promise me?"
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I smile, rub my hand up and down his arm. "Promise me?"
I press myself closer into her neck and sigh through my nose. "Promise."
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Old 10-31-2013, 09:11 AM
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I press myself closer into her neck and sigh through my nose. "Promise."
"Do you really?" I murmur tiredly.
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"Okay...two things," I say, tracing a heart shape into his cheek with my index finger. "Number one...brave? How exactly am I b-brave? And, number two...I meant h-how I look more than how I a-act. Thank you, though...any w-way that you think of me p-positively means a lot..."

Gene's honestly confused as to why he thinks she's pretty. X3
(Ashy, PLEASE check this out.. I promise this link is safe, I made it myself: http://scribbleprincess56.deviantart...-WOT-410249807)
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"Do you really?" I murmur tiredly.
"Yeah." I close my eyes and take in the warmth of her skin, my brow still furrowed. "I doubt it'll work, but yeah. I'll try, at least."
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