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Old 08-19-2011, 06:58 PM
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Winowa has always been a bit of an oddity, drinking whole glasses of water without a breath and so on. She has no place, no one would be her companion. But then she moves to the Florida coast and discovers the ocean... and she finds her place. She can spend whole days in water and she finds it is virtually impossible to drown. She can swim without lessons. And then she discovers something amazing. She meets three girls, Anna, Estella, and Felicity, and she finds that all of them and her were separated at birth and given to different foster parents. What's more, she can't stay away from the water, Anna can't resist the air, Estella rejoices in dirt, and Felicity can't burn herself and is always cold. They find that they can use the elements to their advantage and that they alone are the supernatural beings of earth. With hidden identities and new names, they embark on an adventure to find the other supernatural beings and prevent the earth from the destruction of the demons of the underworld.

If you want to adopt that plot, you can, or just give me a good title. I need one.
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Old 08-19-2011, 09:07 PM
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Winowa has always been a bit of an oddity, drinking whole glasses of water without a breath and so on. She has no place, no one would be her companion. But then she moves to the Florida coast and discovers the ocean... and she finds her place. She can spend whole days in water and she finds it is virtually impossible to drown. She can swim without lessons. And then she discovers something amazing. She meets three girls, Anna, Estella, and Felicity, and she finds that all of them and her were separated at birth and given to different foster parents. What's more, she can't stay away from the water, Anna can't resist the air, Estella rejoices in dirt, and Felicity can't burn herself and is always cold. They find that they can use the elements to their advantage and that they alone are the supernatural beings of earth. With hidden identities and new names, they embark on an adventure to find the other supernatural beings and prevent the earth from the destruction of the demons of the underworld.

If you want to adopt that plot, you can, or just give me a good title. I need one.
Good, but a little cliche. Typical usage of "the four elements" in magic. Typical supernatural good vs supernatural evil, without specifying WHY these girls are "good" and the demons are "evil." All plots are good really, in vague summary. It's what you do to it to make it more complex that matters/
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Good, but a little cliche. Typical usage of "the four elements" in magic. Typical supernatural good vs supernatural evil, without specifying WHY these girls are "good" and the demons are "evil." All plots are good really, in vague summary. It's what you do to it to make it more complex that matters/
Okay, thanks a lot. That really helped.
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I love good plots.

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