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Old 11-01-2012, 04:59 PM
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Hehehehehe, oh my. 8D Must have more! *whips out questions* How old is Cassiel in the fanfic? *rubs hands* Hehehe, you have hooked me. I can't wait until you post this 8D (yes, I will. Reading the third chapter of FW now.)
Cassiel is 20 in the fan fic so Leo is... *forgets*
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Old 11-01-2012, 05:04 PM
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Cassiel is 20 in the fan fic so Leo is... *forgets*
*eyes dart in all direction as she tries to calculate* I dunno.... XD
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Old 11-02-2012, 12:40 PM
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Alright, so a quick update-ish thing on AC.
The next chapter will be out sometime soon, but I'm having a bit of trouble writing this particular scene, so please have patience. It's a bit under 13, 100 words.
ANd, because I felt like it, and explanation of Cassiel and Leander's wings.
Since they're kinda grafted on through magic when you gain certain status, they have some advantages. When they want them/are using them, they manifest in the proper body height/weight ration, and are the same color as the angel's hair. But when they're not needed, they aren't in a physical form, as it's inconvient. They show up as a tattoo in between the shoulder blades in the color of the angel's hair/wings, about three or four inches tall by two or three inches wide. They're like this because, if you're watching over someone, it's odd to have that type of tattoo, but weird to a human if there are wings there. Soo... Yeah, that's it.
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Old 11-05-2012, 04:26 PM
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the first 550 word of chapter four. Enjoy

I sat on a kitchen stool, reading my book and listening to music on my phone. It was kind of nice, considering the situation, just to have a moment of peace. I snorted, amused at the antics of the protagonist, and turned the page, the paper smooth and cool, and ink dark against off white. I was starting on the next page when someone tapped my shoulder. I turned, to see Henri, holding a phone. She asked a question, though I didn’t understand. I pulled the ear bud out of one ear.
“What?” I asked. She gave me a baleful look, and repeated her question.
“Dr. Callahuon isn’t going to cook anything, she says, and I’m ordering Chinese, so what do you want?” she asked, covering the phone with her hand. I shrugged.
“Anything’s good, just as long as–Ow!” I put a hand to my head as a sudden pain stabbed. Henri frowned.
“Are you okay?” she asked. I sat up as the pain abated a little, ready to say yes, but then it hit again.
Cassiel,” I heard in my head. I grunted in pain.
“What?” I asked.
The Council of the Seraphim orders you, Archangel of the Capricorn, to return to the Sanctum immediately. All duties are forfeit, and your return should be as soon as possible,” Said the cold voice. I frowned.
“No.”
“That is not an option. Immediate return is ordered of you by your superiors. If you refuse, you are breaking your oath, and will be punished,” said the voice, a hint of annoyance in its tone now. I gritted my teeth against the pain, and shook my head.
“I’m not coming back,” I said. The voice made a sound of anger, and then receded, taking the pain with it. Henri was giving me an “okay… My friend just started talking to himself. I should probably locate the nearest mental hospital.” Look. I opened my mouth to explain when a wall of pure, undiluted agony hit me.

I was about to ask Cassiel why he’d suddenly started arguing with him when he let out a small, low scream, and clutched his head, tipping off his stool to the floor. He landed on his knees, and groaned, putting a hand out to support himself. I dropped my phone and hurried over.
“Cassiel! What’s wrong? Are you okay?” I asked. He didn’t reply, and a trickle of blood ran from his nose. “Doctor Callahan, come here!” I yelled. I put a hand on Cassiel’s shoulder, and he glanced at me for a second, and then closed his eyes. A small tear escaped from under his eyelashes.
“Doctor!” I yelled again. Dr. Callahuon poked her head around the door to her office, looking slightly annoyed.
“What?” she asked, but then she saw Cassiel. Her eyes widened behind her glasses, and she popped back into her office. I let out a half sound of surprise and exasperation, but turned back to Cassiel as he let out a low, high sound of pain and started to shake. I was about to call for Dr. Callahuon again when she hurried out of her office and into the kitchen. She set a box down on the kitchen floor, and looked him over, saying something under her breath about disobeying orders
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Old 11-09-2012, 07:19 PM
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So, I have depressingly little of the current chapter of AC. I'm arranging ideas that have been lurking, and I don't want it to all pile up into one great big, ugly heap. So, it might take a little longer to get this chapter out to you guys.
Sorry for the inconveniance,

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Old 11-10-2012, 07:25 PM
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So... Yes. Cassiel gets order to return to the Sanctum and refuses. He's 'punished'. The bit I gave you now makes sense, eh? And The Devil's make the first appearance >:}
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So... Yes. Cassiel gets order to return to the Sanctum and refuses. He's 'punished'. The bit I gave you now makes sense, eh? And The Devil's make the first appearance >:}
Oh my god... Is fainting.
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Old 11-10-2012, 07:46 PM
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Oh my god... Is fainting.
Hehe > And Henri demonstrates Niikyo. *evil laughter*
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Old 11-10-2012, 07:47 PM
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hehe >:d And Henri Demonstrates Niikyo. *evil Laughter*
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Old 11-10-2012, 07:52 PM
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Okay XD .
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