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Old 07-05-2013, 05:44 PM
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OKAYSIES GIRLIE HOW ABOUT WE GET TO WORK? (:< You must tell me your plaaaaaaaans. (*nods*)
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Old 07-05-2013, 05:47 PM
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Okay. MY SECRET PLANNNSSS.. *rubs hands*
Okay. So you have the jist of the plot, and what I was thinking is each Idol has a portal that connects the two worlds (Earth and Dimension) and one time Adrianna slips secretly and lands in some person's backyard. And it turns out to be this dude, Cole. and they become friends and maybe there will be a little romance. But that is part of the reason Adrianna is thinking about being mortal.

How are we going to do POV's? We need another main character, Adrianna's BFF in Dimension. Who should it be?? Do you want to use Ivory or maybe someone else..?
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Old 07-05-2013, 05:50 PM
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Okay. MY SECRET PLANNNSSS.. *rubs hands*
Okay. So you have the jist of the plot, and what I was thinking is each Idol has a portal that connects the two worlds (Earth and Dimension) and one time Adrianna slips secretly and lands in some person's backyard. And it turns out to be this dude, Cole. and they become friends and maybe there will be a little romance. But that is part of the reason Adrianna is thinking about being mortal.

How are we going to do POV's? We need another main character, Adrianna's BFF in Dimension. Who should it be?? Do you want to use Ivory or maybe someone else..?
Ooohs I likey. Cole. (*huggles Cole*) COLE YOU BE MY NEW FRIEND. XD
I could do Ivory. I have a few ideas that could be used in her POV. :3
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Old 07-05-2013, 05:55 PM
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Ooohs I likey. Cole. (*huggles Cole*) COLE YOU BE MY NEW FRIEND. XD
I could do Ivory. I have a few ideas that could be used in her POV. :3
Do you want Ivory to be her friend?
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Old 07-05-2013, 05:56 PM
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Okay, I am going to focus on this thread so our planning doesn't take ages.
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Do you want Ivory to be her friend?
Sure! We could work Ivory's outgoing personality in with Adrianna's shyness. :3 Do you want to do the first chapter?
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Old 07-05-2013, 06:00 PM
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Sure! We could work Ivory's outgoing personality in with Adrianna's shyness. :3 Do you want to do the first chapter?
Sounds good! What do you think it should be about.. *lost in confuzzledness*
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Old 07-05-2013, 06:03 PM
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Sounds good! What do you think it should be about.. *lost in confuzzledness*
I dunno. Question: Are they at Apprenticeship?
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Old 07-05-2013, 06:07 PM
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I dunno. Question: Are they at Apprenticeship?
Well, I was thinking for the first book it's Apprenticeship, but then at the end of the book the characters realize that you can be a mortal and an Idol. And the MC (main characters) realize that the Idols have been lying to them. So in the second book they start to rebel, and in the third book there is a war.

Just something random. Maybe the first chappie can be when they are getting ready to leave to go to Apprenticeship, and then it can be the first tests (do you know about those?) and then the training, and etc. etc. etc.
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Old 07-05-2013, 06:11 PM
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Well, I was thinking for the first book it's Apprenticeship, but then at the end of the book the characters realize that you can be a mortal and an Idol. And the MC (main characters) realize that the Idols have been lying to them. So in the second book they start to rebel, and in the third book there is a war.

Just something random. Maybe the first chappie can be when they are getting ready to leave to go to Apprenticeship, and then it can be the first tests (do you know about those?) and then the training, and etc. etc. etc.
Oooh OKAY. I LIKE THAT. I do not know about the first tests O_O I ish intrigued.
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