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Old 09-25-2013, 07:09 PM
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If you want it to be a girl, then, yes. Should she have a boyfriend already? Eh, no offence but I feel like writing on the MC also. Dalia? Okay and then what happens at the end of the chapter? I don't think it should be any cliffhangers but maybe just "The car drove off into the horizon." and she's going home. We could do that, she goes home but on the way, she sees some girl screaming laying on the ground. :O A sign of the Groundworlders. And then at around Chapter 3, they come out of invisiblity and show themselves as different people. But how shall they look different than humans, Grace? They'll be humans but seem different. Any ideas?
You can do the MC if you want, and she doesn't have to be a girl-I just saw it referred as "she" earlier. xD I do like romance in stories, so... xD Um... idk. Maybe demons cold have, like, some wacked up skin or hair or something? IDK. Are all Groundworlders demons?
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Old 09-25-2013, 07:16 PM
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You can do the MC if you want, and she doesn't have to be a girl-I just saw it referred as "she" earlier. xD I do like romance in stories, so... xD Um... idk. Maybe demons cold have, like, some wacked up skin or hair or something? IDK. Are all Groundworlders demons?
Some demons, some humans. Some bad, some good. I usually write girls, so I'll let it be a she. They could all have Scars the shape of a butterfly. That defines their Down-to-earth-ness (get it?). You can do Chapter 1. So:

Chapter 1

—MC talks with her mum about where she's going and about owing her mother money (there needs to be SOME realistic fiction until the horror comes xD)
—MC drives with her boy best friend
—They enter the book club
—You write a bit about which book they're reading, what they're discussing so forth
—MC finished up the book club and then gets in the car
—On the way MC sees a girl screaming on the ground (the sign of demons)
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Old 09-25-2013, 07:20 PM
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Are we both narrating for her or what? (And should I name her? xD)
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Old 09-25-2013, 07:21 PM
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Are we both narrating for her or what? (And should I name her? xD)
We both are, yes. You can name her
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Old 09-25-2013, 07:24 PM
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It can be called the Groundworlder Chronicles but what should Book One be called?
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Old 09-25-2013, 07:25 PM
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Okay. Should we do first person or third person? (And btw, I don't usually use Mum since I live in America, but I can...)
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Old 09-25-2013, 07:27 PM
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Okay. Should we do first person or third person? (And btw, I don't usually use Mum since I live in America, but I can...)
Mom it is! I think third person. Book title, though? XDD When are you going to start writing Chapter 1?
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It can be called the Groundworlder Chronicles but what should Book One be called?
IDK. Maybe The Skyworld Sword? And okay, I'll try third person. xD I'll start when I can get my hands on a laptop. xD

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Old 09-25-2013, 07:32 PM
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IDK. Maybe The Skyworld Sword?
That sounds cool! We'll use that as our book title. Oh! Maybe there could be a chapter with the same name (we should have chapter titles) that the girl finds the Skyworld Sword in her room which the ground of Groundworlders show her?

Alright. STart whenever you want.
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Old 09-25-2013, 07:33 PM
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IDK. Maybe The Skyworld Sword? And okay, I'll try third person. xD I'll start when I can get my hands on a laptop. xD
Third person it is then! Alright cool! Wait, you're not ON a laptop? XD
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