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Old 05-19-2014, 09:32 PM
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Guidance Counselor. Lol.
Okay, I agree. And maybe her parents take her to a shrink, or something?
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Old 05-19-2014, 09:33 PM
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Cool ideas! Hmmm... should she already be a mermaid... IDK. *Thinking of ideas*
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Old 05-19-2014, 09:35 PM
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Or maybe Luna is a new girl that moved to the school, and the girl (forgot her name already lol) follows her and stuff.
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Old 05-19-2014, 09:40 PM
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Or maybe Luna is a new girl that moved to the school, and the girl (forgot her name already lol) follows her and stuff.
Oooo I like that!
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So Luna can change into a human?
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Old 05-19-2014, 09:41 PM
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*Pops in with random clichéness*
Popular girls and nerds? Me a nerd.
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Would it go something like this?
Rising action-
- Luna moves in
- Luna and Mixie meet
-Luna becomes a mermaid (by entering a magical sunken ship while scuba-diving?)
- Luna and Mixie become fast friends
- Luna and Mixie go through some crush adventures about romance (?)
- Luna tells Mixie secret
Climax-
-Mixie spills secret!
Falling action-
- Luna and Mixie get into a fight
- Mixies parents tell guidance person
- Luna and Mixie re-unite (and join with their crushes/boy-friends to help?) "save" Luna
- Mixies parents an after talking call police
- Ending?????????
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Old 05-19-2014, 09:43 PM
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So Luna can change into a human?
Yes. I think... yep.
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Would it go something like this?
Rising action-
- Luna moves in
- Luna and Mixie meet
-Luna becomes a mermaid (by entering a magical sunken ship while scuba-diving?)
- Luna and Mixie become fast friends
- Luna and Mixie go through some crush adventures about romance (?)
- Luna tells Mixie secret
Climax-
-Mixie spills secret!
Falling action-
- Luna and Mixie get into a fight
- Mixies parents tell guidance person
- Luna and Mixie re-unite and join with their crushes/boy-friends to help "save" Luna
- Mixies parents an after talking call police
- Ending?????????
I agree with all of them. Great job!
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Old 05-19-2014, 09:45 PM
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I agree with all of them. Great job!
Thanks! All's I really did was sum it all up.... and add a few things.
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