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Old 05-19-2014, 09:47 PM
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Maybe, Luna could have been descended from royalty, and when she tells her parents, the King makes everyone lose their memory of the merfolk?
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Would it go something like this?
Rising action-
- Luna moves in
- Luna and Mixie meet
-Luna becomes a mermaid (by entering a magical sunken ship while scuba-diving?)
- Luna and Mixie become fast friends
- Luna and Mixie go through some crush adventures about romance (?)
- Luna tells Mixie secret
Climax-
-Mixie spills secret!
Falling action-
- Luna and Mixie get into a fight
- Mixies parents tell guidance person
- Luna and Mixie re-unite (and join with their crushes/boy-friends to help?) "save" Luna
- Mixies parents an after talking call police
- Ending?????????

That sounds good to me. So how do we want to write this? Each person do a paragraph? Or a page? Or do we constructively criticize each other's portions?
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That would be great. So paragraph by paragraph? It's a short story, though.
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Old 05-19-2014, 09:50 PM
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Maybe, Luna could have been descended from royalty, and when she tells her parents, the King makes everyone lose their memory of the merfolk?
Good idea! Maybe he also wants to make Luna stay under the sea, but she refuses Her BFF and BF mean to much to her and she is felling like a part of a family?
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Good idea! Maybe he also wants to make Luna stay under the sea, but she refuses Her BFF and BF mean to much to her and she is felling like a part of a family?
I agree, so he gives her legs?
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Old 05-19-2014, 09:53 PM
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Yeah, paragraph by paragraph works great. Ohhh I thought of something- their BF's bios! I have a idea for one of the boys...(Druse might pair good with either of them...)? Alice do you want to make one, you have not made someone yet?
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I think I'm making the antagonist. But I'll make a boy if you want.
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Old 05-19-2014, 09:55 PM
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I agree, so he gives her legs?
He does not need to if she can turn into a human, right?
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He does not need to if she can turn into a human, right?
I mean, that's how she can turn into a human. There's really no point in making her stay if she can just go on land.
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Old 05-19-2014, 09:58 PM
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I think I'm making the antagonist. But I'll make a boy if you want.
Ok.
Name: Druse Jordan Gordon ('Ruse or DJ' G)

Age: 16 1/2

Gender: male

Clothing Styles:

He almost always wears something green, He has a tendancy to wear worn-in jeans. His style is not fancy because he is poor and it is not him anyways. He has a snake and race-flag tattoo on his collarbone in honor of his dead father whom was a NASCAR racer.

Personality:

Druse is a real softie, but at all no cost a doormat with a little bit if an anger probelm at time. Druse is really friendly for the most part and is a pepole person, even if he can be a little shy at times around people he does not know that well or really wants to impress (a idol etc.) but is more relaxed around people he fully trusts.

Druse loves playing sports, listing to music, singing and is a little bit of a nerd too. Druses fav. sport is skateboarding and basketball is second. At first pepole might get the impresion that he's a airhead but he is not at all, he is quite thoughtful.

Druse is a super loyal person so it bothers him when there is betrayal. Druse does, as earlier said, have anger problems at times and sometimes they get the best of him.
He is a very sensitive and protective person and sometimes might overreact..

Appearance:
http://ts4.mm.bing.net/th?&id=HN.608...h=300&c=0&pid=..

Druse does not pay much attention to how he looks. Since him and his best friend, Ronald, work out a lot he has a 6 pack/pac/pak... his hair color is natural.
Pair him w/ one of the girls?
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