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Old 05-19-2014, 09:58 PM
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I mean, that's how she can turn into a human. There's really no point in making her stay if she can just go on land.
He wants her to be "protected"... seen.
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Old 05-19-2014, 10:01 PM
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GTG soon, it is 10:00pm, and close to my bed time.
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Old 05-19-2014, 10:04 PM
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I think Druse is a great addition to the story.

Maybe Luna and Mixie start out liking the same boy, and Mixie gets jealous, so she purposely tells Luna's secret. And the antagonist lady makes Mixie hate Luna. But, Luna tells Mixie something that snaps her out of it. Then Mixie realizes what she's done and she tries everything she can to help Luna. So then the moral of the story would be that friends come before boyfriends.
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Old 05-19-2014, 10:12 PM
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I think Druse is a great addition to the story.

Maybe Luna and Mixie start out liking the same boy, and Mixie gets jealous, so she purposely tells Luna's secret. And the antagonist lady makes Mixie hate Luna. But, Luna tells Mixie something that snaps her out of it. Then Mixie realizes what she's done and she tries everything she can to help Luna. So then the moral of the story would be that friends come before boyfriends.
Whoa that is amazing.
Perfecto.
So now...
Start writing.
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Old 05-20-2014, 07:23 AM
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I think Druse is a great addition to the story.

Maybe Luna and Mixie start out liking the same boy, and Mixie gets jealous, so she purposely tells Luna's secret. And the antagonist lady makes Mixie hate Luna. But, Luna tells Mixie something that snaps her out of it. Then Mixie realizes what she's done and she tries everything she can to help Luna. So then the moral of the story would be that friends come before boyfriends.
That is really good!
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Old 05-20-2014, 07:32 AM
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My only questions-
Who gets the boy? It sounds like from what you said Luna did.
Is the boy Druse or someone else?
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Old 05-20-2014, 07:51 AM
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My only questions-
Who gets the boy? It sounds like from what you said Luna did.
Is the boy Druse or someone else?
That's what I was wondering. Maybe Luna dumps him because she wants to focus on her friends?
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Old 05-20-2014, 08:00 AM
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Hmm... I don't think Luna would dump him, she only dates someone if she really likes them. Unless you want to pair Druse w/ Mixie.
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Old 05-20-2014, 03:38 PM
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I think Luna would surrender, because she learns that Druse isn't more important than Mixie.
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Old 05-20-2014, 04:43 PM
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So you are saying to pair Mixie with Druse Alice? That's great with me, I am fine w/ either.
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