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Old 06-01-2014, 01:50 PM
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Sure, then I shall do the next. I promise.
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"If I had a world of my own, everything would be nonsense.

Nothing would be what it is, because everything would be what it isn't.
And contrary wise, what is, it wouldn't be.
And what it wouldn't be, it would.
You see?"

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Old 06-01-2014, 02:58 PM
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This is still about Mixie, right? Or are we switching? I think I'm more comfortable with Mixie, so I'll do her.


"That's my girl. I knew you'd agree," Mixie's mom winked at her, but Mixie only narrowed her eyes and crossed her arms.

"I have friends here, Mom. Friends that I've spent years trying to actually secure my friendship with." Mixie decided that anger wasn't the right method to use in such a situation, so she blinked a few tears out and began weeping. Being an actress came in handy. "Mom," she sobbed into her sleeve, "you know how terrible I am at making friends. No one likes me. But here, a few people do like me! I can't throw that all away."

"Mixie," her Mom began, taking on the stop-making-me-the-bad-guy tone, "we're both stubborn and we both know that. But… I'm stubborn and I'm the parent, so we both know I'll always win."

"You can't just narrow down my life into a clever quote, Mom!" Mixie screamed, racing out the front door and collapsing near her favorite tree.
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Old 06-01-2014, 09:03 PM
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IMPORTANT: Your entries were already do. Look at the NSP.
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Old 06-01-2014, 09:10 PM
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The cherry blossom petals drifted lazily around her, making a halo of pink in the air. The gentle spring breeze was beautiful, creating a scene Mixie knew she'd miss.
"What happened, Mix'?" a soft voice called from the other side of the backyard. "Why are you crying? That's not the Mixie I know."
"Oh, Faleigh, I don't know what to do anymore! We're moving!" Mixie sobbed into her hands, and a comforting hand rested itself on her shoulder.
"Remember how shy I was when I first transferred to this school? You saved me, Mix. I promise I'll return that favor. Email you everyday and give you tips, if you want. I'm sure someone as sweet as you will find a friend very soon," Faleigh murmured, plopping onto the ground. Her amber pixie cut was gorgeous, next to her red top and jean-shorts.
"Thanks, Fale," Mixie whispered, looking down at her palms.
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And what it wouldn't be, it would.
You see?"

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Old 06-01-2014, 09:11 PM
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I extended the deadline! Turn your entries in before the 12th!
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Old 06-02-2014, 07:01 AM
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Ok, I'll continue.
Should I continue to when Mixie meets Luna?
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Old 06-02-2014, 08:20 AM
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Ok, I'll continue.
Should I continue to when Mixie meets Luna?
Yeah that's fine.
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Old 06-02-2014, 07:22 PM
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Alright guys we have ten days left to complete and perfect this story. So far... We're three paragraphs into it and the mermaid hasn't even been introduced. So let's work as a team and finish this so we can read over it and make it the best entry that Julia will get!
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Old 06-02-2014, 07:23 PM
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Alright guys we have ten days left to complete and perfect this story. So far... We're three paragraphs into it and the mermaid hasn't even been introduced. So let's work as a team and finish this so we can read over it and make it the beys entry that Julia will get! (Nice pep talk huh?)
Yes! We can do this!
So whenever you want, you can begin, Wendy.
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And what it wouldn't be, it would.
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Old 06-02-2014, 08:55 PM
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I am starting now, post it tomorrow afternoon
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