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Old 07-12-2015, 05:39 AM
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Now for MY villain.
She was beautiful. That was what all the students thought. Her long black hair was dazzling; her lips red and sweet;her clothes shimmering green and black but there was one thing. The eyes. Her eyes were like frozen daggers. They were sharp. She will be so much more than her father. She would be Lyra.

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Old 03-18-2018, 10:22 PM
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Villainnsnsnsnssnsn
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Old 03-19-2018, 12:04 AM
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Ironskill could use some serious development

it's just filed under "DEMONIC EVIL PEOPLE" in my head

but there are nuances and stuff because humans will be humans

you'll find saints in corners you never dreamed

and it's already confirmed that doggo was gonna join Ironskill but then turned around and helped Russell at the last moment

she was just confused

but she was definitely being coerced anyway


haha Ironskill isn't even the main antagonist in the first season

main antagonist right now is LUANNE'S OWN STUBBORNESS (and to an extent her father??? but it's not his fault he doesn't know anything)
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Old 03-29-2018, 02:16 AM
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Gotta flesh out Sin Game's 'villain'

Also, Morrigan is arguably Sun, Moon, and Sky saga's main villain sooooo o o
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Old 03-29-2018, 07:53 PM
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Gotta flesh out Sin Game's 'villain'

Also, Morrigan is arguably Sun, Moon, and Sky saga's main villain sooooo o o
hehehe, a protagonist that sabotages herself and everyone else??
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Old 03-29-2018, 08:44 PM
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hehehe, a protagonist that sabotages herself and everyone else??
lol yup
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Old 03-30-2018, 01:40 PM
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lol yup
uh oh sounds really fun and really pain
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Old 04-03-2018, 02:13 AM
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One of my villains is named Mads Mik after the guy who plays Hannibal Lecter bc I couldn't think of a name for him while writing the plot.

highkey I slip a ton of fandom references into my writing, but that is one of the most obvious.

Mads and Enji might be my two only solid villains, rip I am very bad at creating proper antagonists.
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Old 04-03-2018, 11:43 AM
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One of my villains is named Mads Mik after the guy who plays Hannibal Lecter bc I couldn't think of a name for him while writing the plot.

highkey I slip a ton of fandom references into my writing, but that is one of the most obvious.

Mads and Enji might be my two only solid villains, rip I am very bad at creating proper antagonists.
omg lol nice
I slip fandom refs in but they tend 2 b subtle influence I guess

I can't even think of a solid villain I have lol
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Old 04-03-2018, 01:32 PM
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omg lol nice
I slip fandom refs in but they tend 2 b subtle influence I guess

I can't even think of a solid villain I have lol
ye I stick to using names as references for the most part, but it's not normally so obvious lol. fandom refs r great

villains are so difficult ughhhh. We need a workshop or sth on how to write them.
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