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Old 01-06-2019, 06:50 PM
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She shook her head regretfully. ďSorry. Iíll ask around though. Iím sure Iíll find out something useful, and Iíll tell you as soon as I do,Ē she said, smiling. ďIím really glad youíre feeling more confident about this. Iíll do everything I can to help you win!Ē
(I will full heartedly sacrifice Lorelei for Beckís success rip)
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Old 01-06-2019, 07:10 PM
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Beck smiled at her; he wasnít full-on beaming (that hadnít happened in a while) but still looking positively peppy, which was a vast improvement on his recent mood. Already, thoughts were racing through his head of strategies and what books the library might contain that would be useful. He knew he shouldnít be so happy about this, seeing as he still knew nothing about his other competitor, but he couldnít stop himself from feeling more optimistic about the Struggle.

He took another big bite of food, gratitude and hope shining in his eyes. ďThanks, Dierdre,Ē He said as soon as he swallowed, not sure how to adequately express how much that little tidbit of information cheered him and how much her friendship meant to him. He was the happiest he had been in days, weeks even. Which was dumb, of course, it was only a small bit of information. But Beck still felt a renewed sense of vigor and determination.

(Oh my gosh you donít have to do that lol)
(On an unrelated note, should I give him a love interest?)
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Old 01-07-2019, 04:29 AM
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(man i'm dumb as heck so if i misinterpret things just let me know and I will change it, sorry)

A soft passive smiled played across his face, obscuring the sharpness beneath. "Do i anger you, princess? I spoke out of place, though I'm well aware that what I spoke is the truth. I apologize. I had no intention to set you into such a mood."
He seemed amused, and the glint in his eyes seemed to tell that he was reassessing her. "I am the prince of the south- Bernard. It's a pleasure to meet you, competitor."

(i have no clue what i'm doing hhhh)
Prince of the South? Bernard? By the gods, Saelia wished that she had prepared herself more thoroughly for this, and had known about this man's presence beforehand. His soft smile invited butterflies to flutter their shimmering wings around her stomach, painting a canvas of nerves.

"It's a pleasure to meet you, too, Prince of the South," Saelia introduced herself thereafter, "I'm Saelia Ryenns, the Competitor of the North and the daughter of the Northern Lord. I pray that your stay here is welcoming, and that my father does not hassle you around too much. Gods know that I feel that way sometimes. How do you like the kingdom of Golgaroch so far?"
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Old 01-08-2019, 11:05 PM
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(Ah shoot sorry guys homework suddenly piled up)

He laughed softly, a deep and quiet rumble. ďI should pray so too, though I am here for diplomatic reasons, so perhaps it canít be helped. As for your kingdom, itís beautiful, truly. If I hadnít been here before Iíd scarcely be able to speak from awe of it.Ē
He smiled charmingly at her, though his gaze flitted about her form restlessly. ďSo, where might you be off to today? Iíve arrived earlier than expected, so Iím afraid Iíve found myself with an entire dayís worth of unoccupied time...Ē
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Old 01-08-2019, 11:22 PM
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Dierdre grinned so wide it hurt a little and bumped her shoulder against his. ďOf course!Ē She exclaimed. ďYouíre welcome, but thereís no need to thank me. You know iíd Do anything for you. Iím just happy to see youíre happy. Now, letís leave this subject on a high note. What else shall we discuss?Ē
(I donít have to but I totally would Lolol )
(And ooh yes sure do it or donít idk could be exciting or not, all depends on you haha)
(Im just now realizing Iíve only written one post for Lorelei so far oops)
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Old 01-09-2019, 05:53 PM
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Beck continued to smile. "I don't know, but I read a really good book recently," he replied. "Oh! And there's a new horse in the stables that I absolutely love! His name is Marlo. We should definitely go riding sometime!" He grew more animated as he talked; a fact about that Beck that many people didn't know what that he loved animals and most of the time preferred them to people (though that part wasn't surprising, considering his introverted nature).

(lol)
(hmmm i'm thinking of a possible idea but i'm not sure whether i'll use it so we'll see? and if i do give him a love interest it's definitely gonna create as much angst and drama as possible hehe,, if either of you guys have suggestions or ideas for that i'm up for it)
(tbh I really like Lorelei and Saelia so far!)
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Old 01-11-2019, 10:09 AM
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(Ah shoot sorry guys homework suddenly piled up)

He laughed softly, a deep and quiet rumble. ďI should pray so too, though I am here for diplomatic reasons, so perhaps it canít be helped. As for your kingdom, itís beautiful, truly. If I hadnít been here before Iíd scarcely be able to speak from awe of it.Ē
He smiled charmingly at her, though his gaze flitted about her form restlessly. ďSo, where might you be off to today? Iíve arrived earlier than expected, so Iím afraid Iíve found myself with an entire dayís worth of unoccupied time...Ē
Saelia truly found the Prince of the South interesting and charming, if not profound. "Ah yes, diplomatic reasons. My father ensured me that many of the guests coming tonight would be of the diplomatic kind. Lords, ladies, duchesses, barons... It's a wonder this kingdom isn't brimming with guests yet," she said, words spilling like an overflowing fountain, and much like her concept of guest-brimming kingdoms. I'm actually going to the library to brush up on some of the neighbouring kingdoms so that I can anticipate any shortcuts around winning the Struggle."

Perhaps that was too abrupt. After all, Bernard hailed from another kingdom and not the same one such as she. Maybe it hadn't been the best idea to spill word of her decision to find out all the conspiracies unfurling from the kingdom of the south.
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Before all the stains
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Old 01-19-2019, 01:32 AM
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I love this story so far! If it's not too late to join I have some side characters

Name: Percival Morgan/Lieutenant Morgan
I was hoping he could be second-in-command to the captain of one of the kingdoms royal armies. Would anyone be open to having him play a bodyguard to one of their champions?
Age: 30
Appearance: 6í1, scarred, and muscular. He has a slender handsome face, dark brown hair, a beard that can get quite unruly if not maintained, and dark brown eyes.
Personality: Heís a simple man, loves spending a night at the bar with his men and coming home to spend quality time with his wife and child. Those heís close with know heís extremely gentle despite his intimidating appearance. He often forgets to take care of himself and sometimes puts his duty to the royal family above things like his health and his personal life.

Name: Mira Cosima Morgan/ wife of Percival
Age:27
Appearance: 5í4, golden brown skin, broad shouldered and slender. She has long black hair, expressive almond eyes, and a heart shaped face.
Personality: Nurturing and warm. She makes friends easily and enjoys social gatherings. She has a very soothing presence that helps with the stress of her husbands work. Sheís extremely religious and has a firm belief that everything happens for a reason.
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Old 01-19-2019, 06:32 PM
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(Oh gosh Iím so sorry)

Dierdre smiled fondly. ďYes, we should.Ē She placed a hand over her heart in mock hurt. ďIf weíre still friends. Since by the look on your face I almost feel as though Iíve been replaced by a horse...Ē
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Old 01-19-2019, 06:39 PM
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ďAh, might I accompany you then? I may be able to provide some insights, my diplomatic position in the kingdom does demand for knowledge of our neighbors after all.Ē He paused for a moment, then laughed. ďThat must sound so treacherous. You neednít worry, Iím no viper waiting to strike. Iím simply curious, and a little bored I suppose.Ē
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