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Old 01-17-2017, 08:35 PM
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Can you keep the title Gothy Gloomy Sunshine?? I love that title and I don't want it to change.
If I don't get any better title ideas/suggestions then Gothy Gloomy Sunshine is probably going to stay. I was kinda wondering what that title would make readers think though. Its sounds angsty...then again, I guess the book is pretty angsty xP

I was toying with Suicide Stars as a title because I thought it fit better with the series' title and the sequel title. But I cringe every time I read that so clearly it's not going to work..
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Old 01-18-2017, 02:58 PM
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Ok!!
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Who gave words this much power?
Why do we care so much about their meanings?
These "words" are just lines, curves, and sounds.
That's all words really and truly are.
But if that's what they are,
Then why do these "words" hurt so much?
Why?
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Old 01-21-2017, 09:57 PM
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welp, Jailbreakers is done being posted, coming up next: World of Fear.
But first, keeping with tradition, a list of songs that I listened to while writing Jailbreakers.

1- Airplanes, by B.o.B. ft Hayley Williams
2- Boulevard of Broken Dreams, by Green Day (original broadway cast edition)
3- Perfect, by Hedley
4- Let Her Go, by Passenger
5- Shadows, by Lindsey Stirling
6- Stars Align, by Lindsey Stirling
7- Fireflies, by Owl City
8- Right Here, by Ashes Remain
9- Superheroes, by The Script
10- Radioactive, by Pentatonix ft Lindsey Stirling (Imagine Dragons cover)
11- Pompeii, by Bastille
12- I Won't Give Up, by Jason Mraz
13- We Are Stars, by Virginia to Vegas
14- The Fire, by Kina Grannis
15- Coming Home, by Diddy ft. Skylar Grey
16- Bruises, by Train ft. Ashley Monroe (spec. any scene with Taira)
17- Just Like Fire, by P!nk
18- I Just Wanna Run, by The Downtown Fiction
19- I Will Not Bow, by Breaking Benjamin
20- Breath, by Breaking Benjamin
21- Battleships, by Daughtry
22- Life After You, by Daughtry
23- Invincible, by Hedley
24- The Fighter, by Gym Class Heroes ft Ryan Tedder
25- Masterpiece, by Jessie J
26- True Colors, by Artists Against
27- The Diary of Jane, by Breaking Benjamin
28- Heart of Fire, by Black Veil Brides (spec. when Claira rips the crail's heart out)
29- Sober, by P!nk
30- Pieces, by Rob Thomas (spec. Taira by the pool)
31- Don't Let Me Down, by The Chainsmokers
32- Spirits, by The Strumbellas

plus honestly probably this:
I'm an Albatroaz, by AronChupa
idk, I feel like I listened to that and neglected to put it on the actual playlist.
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Old 01-26-2017, 11:21 PM
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I just found a creepypasta fanfic involving Claira X,D i'm crying, oh my wordd
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Old 01-27-2017, 12:40 PM
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Update Schedule, KP:

Monday: World of Fear, Chp. 1
Tuesday: Jailbreakers edits/ Only Ash, Chp 3, pt 2
Wednesday: Kuebiko, Dépaysement
Thursday: Jailbreakers edits
Friday: Only Ash, Chp. 3, pt. 3

The above schedule is only for this coming week. Until something changes, the weekly update schedule will be as shown below. We'll see if I actually follow through with it :s

Monday: World of Fear
Tuesday: Jailbreakers edits
Wednesday: Kuebiko
Thursday: Only Ash
Friday: Jailbreakers edits


*Also to be noted! The following books are on hold until further notice:

- Here's to the Broken Kids
- Gothy Gloomy Sunshine
- Black Hole Sun
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Old 01-27-2017, 02:23 PM
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I've posted one of my most recent short stories, about to post another. I've got audio to go with one, will record the second tomorrow.
heyyyyyyy
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Old 02-07-2017, 02:46 PM
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Wow, that schedule failed.
I blame last month me for thinking I had enough time to balance school and writing.

@Rebecca, I read your story, it was good!
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Old 02-07-2017, 04:27 PM
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There are so many songs there I not only jam to, but LOVE! You have good taste.
As for your stories, I am amazed that you can divide your brain so much. And you still participate in the NES? My goodness…..

I've been recently focusing on one thing at a time. Learning the hard way, doing so much at once actually causes me to explode. If you'd rather have your CC here, in case emailing is too much work, I wouldn't mind taking a short break to help you out.
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Old 02-28-2017, 01:30 PM
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There are so many songs there I not only jam to, but LOVE! You have good taste.
As for your stories, I am amazed that you can divide your brain so much. And you still participate in the NES? My goodness…..

I've been recently focusing on one thing at a time. Learning the hard way, doing so much at once actually causes me to explode. If you'd rather have your CC here, in case emailing is too much work, I wouldn't mind taking a short break to help you out.
Clearly you have good taste in music too x)

lol unfortunately for me, my brain divides that much automatically. i have too many tabs open.. but heyy if you have any CC you can put it wherever works best for you. If you prefer email you can catch me at zelda1gypsy@hotmail.com
or if KP (or wattpad) is more convenient then you already know where to find me

I tip my hat and give thanks to you, good sir.
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Old 02-28-2017, 01:33 PM
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World of Fear is now on hold. Because reasons.
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