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Old 01-22-2013, 06:02 PM
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I had an idea of it being a description of a stormy night with a shapeshifter walking down a pathway.
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Old 01-22-2013, 06:05 PM
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THE FIRST PARAGRAPH (MY PARAGRAPH)

SINCE when were the blue skies turning a rapid crimson into the wind as the haunting devil spoke for itself? Blue sparks appeared and then you knew it was fire. Flames speckering everywhere and nobody knew how they got there. Black, gray and orange smoke filled the air especially for two to die. That's all there was and ever would be; fire dancing in the air on a cold and stormy night.
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Old 01-22-2013, 06:15 PM
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This thread is for Survivor-KidPub Challenge #1.
We are supposed to write 5 sentences each. Max has a post saying our order for writing it. Please post in YOUR place, and in YOUR place ONLY. Okay?

Order:

1- Max
2- . infinity
3-
4-
5-
6- Lydia

Thanks! Just post when it's your turn!
(P.S. Sorry if this is clogging WB a little bit... :/)
Hello? I'm third, thanks.
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Old 01-22-2013, 06:16 PM
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I had an idea of it being a description of a stormy night with a shapeshifter walking down a pathway.
I don't know if I like the shapeshifter thing. Shapeshifting has degenerated into a cliche lately.
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Old 01-22-2013, 06:16 PM
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1. Me (finished paragraph)
2. Infinity
3. Sophie / The Velvet Touch
4. Not Volunteered
5. Not Volunteered
6. Lydia
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Old 01-22-2013, 06:17 PM
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THE FIRST PARAGRAPH (MY PARAGRAPH)

SINCE when were the blue skies turning a rapid crimson into the wind as the haunting devil spoke for itself. Blue sparks appeared and then you knew it was fire. Flames speckering everywhere and nobody knew how they got there. Black, gray and orange smoke filled the air especially for two to die. That's all there was and ever would be; fire dancing in the air on a cold and stormy night.
(Nice beginning. But the first sentence... Shouldn't that be a question?)
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Old 01-22-2013, 06:17 PM
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I don't know if I like the shapeshifter thing. Shapeshifting has degenerated into a cliche lately.
Ah. Yes. Maybe we should just do like a creature made out of fire coming out of the flames?
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Old 01-22-2013, 06:18 PM
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(Nice beginning. But the first sentence... Shouldn't that be a question?)
(I changed it. Now we need to get Infinity here to write her second paragraph.)
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Old 01-22-2013, 06:19 PM
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(I changed it. Now we need to get Infinity here to write her second paragraph.)
(Yep. Lemme see what I can do...)
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Old 01-22-2013, 06:20 PM
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(Yep. Lemme see what I can do...)
Okay. Cool.
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