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Old 01-22-2013, 06:21 PM
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Okay. Cool.
Okay, I changed my username to 'INFINITY TO WB/AN!' XD
Now we just wait.
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WHAT ARE YOU STARING AT ME FOR?
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Old 01-22-2013, 06:30 PM
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Awesome sauce! I'll be waiting
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Old 01-22-2013, 06:31 PM
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Awesome sauce! I'll be waiting
It's your turn.
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Old 01-22-2013, 06:32 PM
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Awesome sauce! I'll be waiting
You need to make the next paragraph. Look at the first page or second page for my paragraph and quote it to make another paragraph.
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Old 01-22-2013, 06:36 PM
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Ah. Yes. Maybe we should just do like a creature made out of fire coming out of the flames?
Yes please. Make the paragraph longer, more like five to seven sentences please. It's a bit short...
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Old 01-22-2013, 06:37 PM
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Yes please. Make the paragraph longer, more like five to seven sentences please. It's a bit short...
We can only do five sentences...
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Yes please. Make the paragraph longer, more like five to seven sentences please. It's a bit short...
Will said only five sentences are allowed.
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Old 01-22-2013, 06:38 PM
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Okay, umm, I'm not so sure, tell me to change it if it's bad/doesn't fit with the story! Thanks

SINCE when were the blue skies turning a rapid crimson into the wind as the haunting devil spoke for itself. Blue sparks appeared and then you knew it was fire. Flames speckering everywhere and nobody knew how they got there. Black, gray and orange smoke filled the air especially for two to die. That's all there was and ever would be; fire dancing in the air on a cold and stormy night.

BEFORE the sun set, there was a faint glimmer of shadowy light, the two had no clue. They might have held tighter hands, if only they could see their fate. They might've cried, or called a dear one, but no. They didn't know, and it was better that way. It's hard to kill a nervous wreck, or somebody hiding behind an old redwood tree.
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Old 01-22-2013, 06:40 PM
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Okay, umm, I'm not so sure, tell me to change it if it's bad/doesn't fit with the story! Thanks

SINCE when were the blue skies turning a rapid crimson into the wind as the haunting devil spoke for itself. Blue sparks appeared and then you knew it was fire. Flames speckering everywhere and nobody knew how they got there. Black, gray and orange smoke filled the air especially for two to die. That's all there was and ever would be; fire dancing in the air on a cold and stormy night.

BEFORE the sun set, there was a faint glimmer of shadowy light, the two had no clue. They might have held tighter hands, if only they could see their fate. They might've cried, or called a dear one, but no. They didn't know, and it was better that way. It's hard to kill a nervous wreck, or somebody hiding behind an old redwood tree.
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Old 01-22-2013, 06:41 PM
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Okay, umm, I'm not so sure, tell me to change it if it's bad/doesn't fit with the story! Thanks

SINCE when were the blue skies turning a rapid crimson into the wind as the haunting devil spoke for itself. Blue sparks appeared and then you knew it was fire. Flames speckering everywhere and nobody knew how they got there. Black, gray and orange smoke filled the air especially for two to die. That's all there was and ever would be; fire dancing in the air on a cold and stormy night.

BEFORE the sun set, there was a faint glimmer of shadowy light, the two had no clue. They might have held tighter hands, if only they could see their fate. They might've cried, or called a dear one, but no. They didn't know, and it was better that way. It's hard to kill a nervous wreck, or somebody hiding behind an old redwood tree.
That is a very nice paragraph, Infinity. You have improved.

Sophie. Your turn. (:
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