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Old 06-29-2009, 10:47 PM
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Turns out you got plastic chains. Sagar escapes but is somehow not fit to come to the surface to do to circumstances out of my control. *coughcough*

Rachel ends up the victim of her own as well as my tortures.
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Old 06-30-2009, 12:31 PM
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Only a complete fool would mistake plastic chains for real ones. My chains are metal, and neither of you can escape. And for that comment, Shayok gets his eyes gouged out.
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Old 06-30-2009, 06:19 PM
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Shayok decides that Rachel is a worse threat then Sagar. He takes a harpoon gun and shoots at Rachel.
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Old 06-30-2009, 09:27 PM
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I'm honored. Shayok thinks I'm the worst threat.

Sagar's aim is so pathetic that the torpedo misses by a mile and crashes into the ocean. Rachel ducks the harpoon, then breaks Shayok's harpoon gun with an an axe. She then takes an AK-47 and shoots the full catridge at Sagar and Shayok.
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Old 07-01-2009, 03:09 PM
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Yup, totally.

Sagar is too busy laughing at Rachel to notice that one of the bullets is coming directly at him. It sinks itself into his right shoulder, making it impossible for him to move his arm. It imbeds itself so deep in his shoulder that it shatters his collarbone. Poor Sagar.
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Old 07-01-2009, 03:57 PM
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The aftershock of the torpedo's explosion sends Sagar tumbling out of the submarine. He falls into the ocean, and since he can't move his right arm, begins to drown. A few sharks smell the blood pouring out of his injured arm and swim to the sub to try and eat him. *mock gasp* Oh, no!
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Old 07-02-2009, 01:54 AM
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Shayok grins with malicious glee as he watches the two fools. One is about to die, one is in coma... Perfect! He summons his private fleet of air force to take him to land, where he begins his conquest unobstructed.

The end.
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Old 07-02-2009, 03:40 AM
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Oh...what kind of shark? Leopards are pretty agressive, so are tiger's...and sand tigers...hmm. I know! Basking Sharks! Those guys are nice, they eat planton.
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Old 07-02-2009, 02:19 PM
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Great Whites. They'll eat Sagar.

And it's not the end, Shayok. Just 'cause you're gone doesn't mean I can't wake up (eventually...).
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Old 07-02-2009, 02:20 PM
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you want a shark that'll eat Sagar? Great Whites aren't as aggressive as bull sharks...or sand tigers.
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