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Old 01-01-2012, 04:54 PM
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For the whole seven months I've been on KP, I've always needed help with my writing. I know it's improved quite a bit since my first month on KidPub, but I feel as though it hasn't improved enough and it's still sloppy. I need help on descriptive writing because I'm really bad at that. I have everything else sorted, I know how to make good characters and a good storyline (Yeah, right, bahahahaha!) I need more better description words and stuff like that.
If anyone could help me for a few days at the least I'd be grateful.
My email is owen.lunt@yahoo.com I hope I'm not being too needy by asking for this but seriously, I've written tons of short stories and my writing never improves one bit. Thanks for taking your time to click on this and hopefully read it. I hope somebody replies unlike some of my other posts :/ Oh and I noticed that the font seems smaller, is that just me or an update? O_o (I have a feeling people are going to answer the second question more than the first .-.)
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Old 01-01-2012, 05:39 PM
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I don't think the font is smaller XD
Anywho...email sent!
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Old 01-01-2012, 05:56 PM
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Thanks Moogle, oh and by the way, was your username inspired by the Moogles in Final Fantasy? lol
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Old 01-01-2012, 06:33 PM
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Email sent!

Wow, I wrote more than I thought..
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Old 01-01-2012, 07:16 PM
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Try a thesauras?
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Old 01-10-2012, 09:09 PM
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Seach synonyms for words you want interesting, new words for. Put yourself IN the storyline- describe the five senses and so on. (:
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