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Old 09-14-2012, 08:09 PM
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Colin Guilders is the shy and bullied type of kid. He always gets harassed and teased, though. One day, a new girl arrives at the school he's in. But no one wants to look at her. After a few days of silence, Colin realizes that only he can see her and no one else can. The thing is: What is this girl's secret? Why did she come here in the first place? READ TO FIND OUT. . .

I need some comments on this idea and suggestions for a title.
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Old 09-14-2012, 09:45 PM
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This reminds me of a Japanese book translated into Chinese that I've read.
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Old 09-15-2012, 10:38 AM
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I think it would work out if you wrote it well. I'd read it, though I don't have title suggestions right now...
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Old 09-15-2012, 06:27 PM
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Sounds awesome, and I love the idea.

A title suggestion would be: The Unseen Girl.
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Old 09-15-2012, 06:38 PM
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Sounds awesome, and I love the idea.

A title suggestion would be: The Unseen Girl.
That sounds awesome. I think I have a few titles in mind including yours.
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Old 09-15-2012, 07:02 PM
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That sounds awesome. I think I have a few titles in mind including yours.

Thanks for including the story title in your ideas for titles. XD Post it soon.
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Old 10-22-2012, 07:57 PM
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Wow... I want to read that! Frankly, I wish that had been my idea.
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Old 10-26-2012, 08:17 PM
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Paranormal is always fun to read! This sound like an epic plot.

I can't think of any titles, though. My mind has left me... -.-
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