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Old 12-27-2014, 08:12 PM
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Oooh, cross-orchestral romance... forbidden passion between the horn and string sections...
the horn player is now aro/ace. because i can. 8D also i attempted a ship name but it kinda fails.
PLUS I NEED COMMENTS OK
IT'S ON THE MAINSITE OR YOU CAN STALK MY TRACK

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Old 12-27-2014, 08:14 PM
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Paranormal romance excerpt:



Adam stood in the scent, and breathed it in, nearly coughing, nearly gagging at the smell but kept it all in as he stood there on the stony, rocky, broken ground. He gripped his axe tighter in his left hand, and closed his eyes.
The darkness fulfilled him, closed him in a room where he didn’t have to think but just had to listen, and that was the automatic structure of a demon, of what he was. He closed his eyes and he listened, and heard a hiss of a sword.
He opened his eyes, turned around, and ducked just before he got his head cut off. A witch was in front of him, elemental magic dripping off of the tip of her axe as she ran up towards him, but he slammed the axe point into her neck, pushing her onto the ground.
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Old 12-27-2014, 09:01 PM
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tbh I'm so excited for both of your stories
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Old 12-27-2014, 11:02 PM
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tbh I'm so excited for both of your stories
http://www.kidpub.com/book-page-or-c...ly-gets-crush-
yooo this is chapter two
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Old 12-28-2014, 07:00 AM
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Part of my wants to edit my story about the trans genius and war and stuff, but the other part knows it will never be appropriate for KP on account of the constant expletives.
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Old 12-28-2014, 11:21 PM
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more of a rant about what I'm not writing but

I really really want to write a story about a vigilante
which I know is really overdone but an original twist on it would be great to write
maybe a steampunk about witch-hunter vigilantes?
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Old 12-28-2014, 11:23 PM
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hey
hey guys
I climbed out of my "I will never write stories again I don't have the patience" hole and actually wrote something substantial.
maybe check it out idontknowjustmaybe?

http://www.kidpub.com/book-page-or-c...t-i-2228152837
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Old 12-29-2014, 01:16 AM
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so now a rant about what I wrote a while ago

ahhhhh that awful moment when you can feel your face get hot when you read romance you wrote half a year ago
ughhhhh why I think I'm going to cry
please don't tell me I wrote this ;-;
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Old 12-29-2014, 09:09 AM
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more of a rant about what I'm not writing but

I really really want to write a story about a vigilante
which I know is really overdone but an original twist on it would be great to write
maybe a steampunk about witch-hunter vigilantes?
I think that's great.
Seriously.
I want in.
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Old 12-31-2014, 07:28 PM
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Like, I have characters who would fit that setting and I'm so jealous you got there first. Unfortunately, I am bad at collaborations.
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