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Old 01-17-2019, 07:48 PM
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so I'm doing 4 homeworks at the same time and i just wanted to say

yesterday my ela teacher hosted a carnival and we all had our own booths to run
and the booth next to mine invited me to submit the end of an incomplete story they had for a contest to win 20 bucks and i found out she's been freaking out about who to give the prize to because she loves the stories two of the people submitted and i found out I'm one of the two??? now I'm really mad because the other one is her best friend and i feel like i should have written more >:l

i think she's going to announce the winners tmrw so um
i hope i win
but i highly doubt it
because
again
the other girl is her best friend
and like 972381972398 years older than i am
so
*uhM*
wish me lucc

edit:
sO bAsIcAlLy the story is about some girl who's getting ready to sell all of her deceased father's clothes and she gets a phone call and it ends there
and i wrote that the anonymous caller who had a very familiar voice says they found his grave all dug up and his coffin wasn't in there. i also wrote that it was 4 years since that call and the case remained a mystery
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Old 07-29-2019, 07:27 PM
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omg I'm just shuffling through Eastfield to remind myself how it goes and who's involved when I rEDISCOVER THE DETAIL THAT MY ANGRY MATH BOY, CARLTON, ONCE CARRIED HIS BABY BROTHER FOR THIRTEEN MILES WITHOUT COMPLAINING UNTIL THEY MADE IT SAFELY TO THEIR UNCLE'S HOUSE.


I love that entire family so so much
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Old 11-30-2019, 08:11 PM
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so yall. I got a newish undertale au that I call auwndbdgisaj (abbreviated "That AU where Nobody Dies but Doctor Gaster is Still a Jerk") in which none of the human children that fall into the underground die, but the Handplates AU still sort of happens-
with the deviations that Gaster is trying to prevent Asgore having to kill his own kids-
and that when sans pushes him Chara is there to catch him-
and that after that everybody loves papyrus but only Chara likes Sans since she really understands him and what he's going thru-
and that eventually frisk falls and things go real south real fast-
but the main reason I love this au is because this version of Chara is SO GOOD and Sans and her are bffflllssss

(walking Frisk towards New Home)
Chara: I know youuuu… I walked with you once upon a dream... I know youuuu...the gleam in your eyes is so familiar a gleam...comedian, come on
Sans: (eyerolls) and I know it's true that visions are seldom what they seem...
Frisk: (rudely interrupts) are you two a couple
Chara: (three seconds of does not compute)
Sans: (on the floor, cracking up)
Chara: you're laughing too much
Sans: rofl
Chara: stop
Sans: (panting, wipes tears from eyes) No, no, me...and Chara? No lol
Chara: You better be sure. I mean, I love him, but...not that way!
Sans: Ye, I mean, I chara about you a lot tho
Chara: ….…..
Sans: : D
Chara: Don't lose your sans-e of self, you're getting rly awkward now
Sans: pfft nice one
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Old 12-02-2019, 03:29 PM
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...maybe i should just make an Undertale AU where all it is is NOBODY F*CKING DIED

...what should i name the six human souls...

Justice is Jesse (male)
that I know...
Kindness could be Kylie?
and Integrity could be Ingrid?
Paisley for Patience
Percy for Perseverance
and ummm
we've still got Bravery
BRANDON

...should I include Gaster...?
don't know if he actually died...
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Old 12-06-2019, 06:43 PM
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anything anybody writes about gaster is speculation, but the speculation gaster I assume is true is Zarla's Handplates gaster
this isn't to say you shouldn't write about gaster

whatever happened to him, he was here and now is not, which seems sad unless he was totally evil...

please, speculate!

My version of the six kids' names (which you can use but certainly don't have to):

Patience- Emi (Emediong Ime)
Bravery-Basil Hardy
Kindness-Ellis Greene
Justice-Justin Nima
Perseverance-Fahim Adnan
Integrity- Indy (Indira Darnell)

I have loads of headcanons about their appearances, do you have thoughts?
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Old 12-09-2019, 09:08 AM
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ugh all I can manage to write now is rambles and romantic stuff about my ocs (well technically they're mine and ena's; ena came up with one of them and I came up with the other and they're the physical embodiment of teenage angst it's AMAZING) but I really want to write, and at the same time I can't be motivated to do anything if anyone gets what I'm saying.

Anyways just so that I can finally get something down on paper ("paper", but whatever you know the term) I'm gonna ramble on about my characters again. No spoilers really, since I don't even know if I'm going with my current plot (I'm always constantly changing it), but the one constant in my story are these two adorable lovebirds.

So Quinn and Toshiyuki are assassins, and they're almost equally matched in every way except for magic/sorcery, which scored Quinn the equivalent of a kinda 'captain' position among the assassins, while Toshiyuki is only the vice captain.
Tosh is kinda bitter at nature and doesn't really have any friends among the assassin group; he's the closest to Quinn because they have to work closely on missions, but he's overall more of an outlier and causes Quinn quite a bit of trouble, whether intentional or not. He kinda has a inferiority complex I think, and compares himself to Quinn all the time, even though he isn't actually worse than she is and they can be said to be equals.
Quinn plays more by the rules and keeps up a friendly facade well enough with her subordinates- she doesn't smile much around them, but is generally kind. However, her subordinates are mostly older than she is. Her mother died early on and her father works for the court/power, so she started her training earlier than others normally would, and was pretty gifted in fighting and whatnot, which made her advance quickly, drawing resentment from classmates that turned out to be her subordinates, so there's this whole hostile vibe going on, and as a result she's pretty lonely most of the time.

Tosh and Quinn have this sort of tentative relationship? Like Quinn wants to be his friend, except she's too proud to admit that, and also because Toshiyuki will gives her enough of a hard time that she doesn't want to open up to him and risk anything at the same time. Tosh has been hurt by friends before and realizes that he's not as good as any of them, so he doesn't really want to get hurt again, and also because of his pride.
anyway i gotta go bc my brother wants to use my cpu lmao so i'll talk abt it later probs.
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Old 12-09-2019, 01:40 PM
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to Graci:

I actually drew a fanart about it


This is it, lol
I draw a lot of fanarts
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Old 12-09-2019, 03:35 PM
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I'm gonna call the AU the Vitae AU (from the Latin word for life). I've started on a comic about it, yeet
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Old 12-09-2019, 07:08 PM
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ugh all I can manage to write now is rambles and romantic stuff about my ocs (well technically they're mine and ena's; ena came up with one of them and I came up with the other and they're the physical embodiment of teenage angst it's AMAZING) but I really want to write, and at the same time I can't be motivated to do anything if anyone gets what I'm saying.

Anyways just so that I can finally get something down on paper ("paper", but whatever you know the term) I'm gonna ramble on about my characters again. No spoilers really, since I don't even know if I'm going with my current plot (I'm always constantly changing it), but the one constant in my story are these two adorable lovebirds.

So Quinn and Toshiyuki are assassins, and they're almost equally matched in every way except for magic/sorcery, which scored Quinn the equivalent of a kinda 'captain' position among the assassins, while Toshiyuki is only the vice captain.
Tosh is kinda bitter at nature and doesn't really have any friends among the assassin group; he's the closest to Quinn because they have to work closely on missions, but he's overall more of an outlier and causes Quinn quite a bit of trouble, whether intentional or not. He kinda has a inferiority complex I think, and compares himself to Quinn all the time, even though he isn't actually worse than she is and they can be said to be equals.
Quinn plays more by the rules and keeps up a friendly facade well enough with her subordinates- she doesn't smile much around them, but is generally kind. However, her subordinates are mostly older than she is. Her mother died early on and her father works for the court/power, so she started her training earlier than others normally would, and was pretty gifted in fighting and whatnot, which made her advance quickly, drawing resentment from classmates that turned out to be her subordinates, so there's this whole hostile vibe going on, and as a result she's pretty lonely most of the time.

Tosh and Quinn have this sort of tentative relationship? Like Quinn wants to be his friend, except she's too proud to admit that, and also because Toshiyuki will gives her enough of a hard time that she doesn't want to open up to him and risk anything at the same time. Tosh has been hurt by friends before and realizes that he's not as good as any of them, so he doesn't really want to get hurt again, and also because of his pride.
anyway i gotta go bc my brother wants to use my cpu lmao so i'll talk abt it later probs.
court intrigue politics and teen angst also the only heterosexual ship with rights
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Sure would love to write. Wish I had the gODDAMN TIME
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