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Old 07-12-2017, 07:17 PM
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As a part of Renaissance efforts, I was thinking perhaps we should have more old writing critiques on the NSP like we used to. It would help the younger and newer of us to see how to improve their own writing, I think, and it would help those of us doing it see how we have improved and where we can still yet improve.

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Old 07-12-2017, 10:13 PM
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Plfdsvifmgcuj give me more info about this if possible o.o
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Old 07-12-2017, 10:55 PM
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As a part of Renaissance efforts, I was thinking perhaps we should have more old writing critiques on the NSP like we used to. It would help the younger and newer of us to see how to improve their own writing, I think, and it would help those of us doing it see how we have improved and where we can still yet improve.

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I'm cool with that. I have a loooooot of old writing to critique.
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Old 07-12-2017, 11:04 PM
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Plfdsvifmgcuj give me more info about this if possible o.o
Sy, here's one example I found:
https://www.kidpub.com/story/old-wri...ing-2126146957
There used to be a lot of these on KP.
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Old 07-12-2017, 11:04 PM
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I'm cool with that. I have a loooooot of old writing to critique.
Haha, oooohhhhh boy, me too
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Old 07-13-2017, 10:27 AM
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Hell yes, Old Writing Critiques are the best. (ouo)
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Old 07-13-2017, 01:02 PM
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Sy, here's one example I found:
https://www.kidpub.com/story/old-wri...ing-2126146957
There used to be a lot of these on KP.
That's one of the funniest examples on KP, actually. XD I don't even bother looking at my old work as it is REAAAALLY cringey.

I'm talking stuff that people like Kay, Leloo, Wolfwriter, and others used to read. Such a long time ago.
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Old 07-13-2017, 01:15 PM
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That's one of the funniest examples on KP, actually. XD I don't even bother looking at my old work as it is REAAAALLY cringey.

I'm talking stuff that people like Kay, Leloo, Wolfwriter, and others used to read. Such a long time ago.
Haha, wow, I remember them! That was so long ago.

Ugh I know, it's all so cringey and embarrassing, but critiquing it is a good lesson^^
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Old 04-09-2018, 12:08 PM
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BITCH I should do this
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yo I posted one pls check the nsp and comment on it
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