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Oh, the Rain by LoganStrain

Oh, the Rain by LoganStrain

Runner-up, KidPub February writing contest

It occurs to me,
That you have never seen rain.
Would you like me to describe it?

Oh, yes.
I would do that for you.
And I would describe it something like this:

The feel of the rain,
As it splashes against your skin;
The gracious and soothing wet.

The sound of the rain,
As it pitters across the ground;
The sounds of life.

The smell of the rain,
As its scent scatters everywhere;
The sentient breath of nature.

The taste of the rain,
As you open your mouth to sample;
The divine delectability.

 

That is rain,
Oh, that beautiful torrent of water;
Just for you.

 

Congratulations on winning a

Congratulations on winning a prize!

Posted by Alice on Tue, 03/11/2014 - 11:00
This is absolutely

This is absolutely beautiful, Logan! You did an amazing job!! I love it! 

Posted by NightOwl0_0 (a ... on Tue, 03/11/2014 - 12:02
Geez. Guys, I'm speechless.

Geez.

Guys, I'm speechless.  

Thank you so much!  

:D :D :D

 

Don't Click.

"So I bare my skin, and I count my sins, and I close my eyes and I take it in."

Posted by The Nocturnal {... on Tue, 03/11/2014 - 12:24
Great word choice.

Great word choice. Congratulations on winning! "Genius is one percent inspiration and ninety-nine percent perspiration. Accordingly, a 'genius' is often merely a talented person who has done all of his or her homework." ~Thomas Edison~

Posted by Kirsten on Wed, 03/12/2014 - 09:08

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