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Posted February 28th, 2021 by EmilyRocks_9

by BestBunnies101
in Wisconsin
February 28th, 2021

 One day a little boy named Bob was playing outside with his dog. Suddenly a U.F.O landed right next to him he got on and all Of a sudden it took off and went into space where Bob suffocated the end.                              Moral: do not be nosey.


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Again nice story, but try to

Again nice story, but try to make them longer! give background! why was he outside? how did he get his dog? why did he get in the UFO?

Posted by Ryoko on Sun, 02/28/2021 - 11:43
thanks ryoko

thanks ryoko

Posted by EmilyRocks_9 on Mon, 03/01/2021 - 20:52
Is the dog okay!?   Good

Is the dog okay!?

 

Good yard,

(Warmest regards)

Snow

Posted by Tía Snow on Mon, 03/01/2021 - 20:46
yes

yes

Posted by BestBunnies101 on Mon, 03/01/2021 - 20:51
That is

That is good! 

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Posted by Ryoko on Tue, 03/02/2021 - 11:36

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