Alternate route for Chapter 7 of One Single Song
Posted November 17th, 2022 by ElizieAngelina
November 17th, 2022
I originally planned to have Alice and Lily actually get into a real fight. (When I was first writing the book.) Remember this sector?
Because my writing style had gotten more intense, I decided to follow my old route and get a bit physical, but shied away from a fight. In that route, Alice did not run when she slapped Lily. By that point, Lily calls Alice a "little pig" and shoves her. They then begin fighting which includes Alice being overwhelmed.
Damn, what was my 9-year-old mind thinking?
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