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Alternate route for Chapter 7 of One Single Song

Alternate route for Chapter 7 of One Single Song

Posted November 17th, 2022 by ElizieAngelina

by Elizabeth
in Texas

November 17th, 2022

I originally planned to have Alice and Lily actually get into a real fight. (When I was first writing the book.) Remember this sector?

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Alice scoffed, "Well, maybe you deserved it." She promptly walked away, and Lily grabbed her arm again, saying, "I'm gonna win. I'm gonna wi-"

Alice slapped Lily back. She'd never raised a hand to anyone. Ever. Lily staggered, and Alice ran away as fast as she could, her feet scraping on the casino carpet.

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Because my writing style had gotten more intense, I decided to follow my old route and get a bit physical, but shied away from a fight. In that route, Alice did not run when she slapped Lily. By that point, Lily calls Alice a "little pig" and shoves her. They then begin fighting which includes Alice being overwhelmed.

Damn, what was my 9-year-old mind thinking?


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