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Blindness

Blindness

Posted December 26th, 2018 by Ninasilverrose

by Nina
in British Columbia

December 29th, 2018

There was once a good son, a wonderful son,

No one to understand his darkest, deepest desire

Can't you see the darkness in his heart?

Oh how blind they were

 

But it was soon revealed,

He wished to harm mortality

Perhaps more than met the eye,

He had no taste for caring nor love

 

He wanted all, everything,

Tempting them to follow their desires,

But couldn't they see? See the pain inside his red-stricken bed?

Oh, how blind I really was.

 

My son, my wonderful son,

I saw no pain inside of you,

But that mask, that mask you wore,

Oh how it must have pained you so

 

No matter now, it's passed

You suffer inside your mind

Thought none loved you no more,

And I played play pretend

 

Oh, how darkness finds its core inside the heart,

I thought it was for the best,

But, oh, how blind I was

To YOUR deepest desire

 

To be loved, I knew the realm,

You did not, oh my son

You shall never forgive me,

I know, the truth hits hard

 

You saw, from our home,

How mortals cared

You wanted it all, 

To taste the love, to take it all away

 

They came, here they came,

To banish you for something you never tasted,

Inside of your heart

Darkness found its way instead of love

 

You shan't come back, oh no,

I can't take back what i have lost,

The wonderful, good son,

Is now gone for all time

 

You shall never value something,

That appears so, so simple,

And yet when it is lost,

It scars you forever

 

 

 

 

 

 


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Posted by Arnav on Wed, 12/26/2018 - 08:06
What?

What?

Posted by Nina on Wed, 12/26/2018 - 14:16
Sorry if i wasnt clear I

Sorry if i wasnt clear

I meant i was speechless as your poem was great!

 

"I couldn't find a good quote from anyone, so I decided to make an inspiring one myself. I think I've failed at that." Arnav (me)

 

 

Posted by Arnav on Wed, 01/16/2019 - 13:48
Oh! Well, thank you very

Oh! Well, thank you very much!

Posted by Nina on Fri, 01/18/2019 - 21:15
This is a really interesting

This is a really interesting poem. I don't know exactly what's going on, but somehow, that doesn't matter. I really love it.

You do have a misspelled word: "disires" in line 10 should be "desires".

Besides that, good job!

 

 

Posted by justasmalltowng... on Sat, 12/29/2018 - 13:05
Thank you very much! I'm

Thank you very much! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Posted by Nina on Sat, 12/29/2018 - 14:55

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