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Posted April 10th, 2018 by Billy

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by Briana
in New York

April 10th, 2018

This boy

Tangles my heart
And he makes me want to rip myself apart
Makes me feel things I never want to end

But it's not from his compliments

His eyes his smile his drowning mind
The way he goes against what I've known

And effortlessly let's it go

I won't lie it does hurt
the way he unwinds most of the time I have a good cry over it.

It's foolish to cry over a stranger
Were told they're so full of danger

no I'm not naive anymore it's not love like I felt before

But it isn't nothing I'm sure it is something and it makes feel so warm

Though it

Brings an emotional storm

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Soooo good and very

Soooo good and very relatable!

CC: in line 12, you say “were” and I think you mean “we’re”. Otherwise, phenomenal!
Do you know what Angelica said, when she read what you'd done? She said: "You've married and Icarus. He's flown to close to the sun."

Posted by Rambouten101 on Wed, 04/11/2018 - 16:04
Thanks so much and ty for

Thanks so much and ty for the critique didn't notice that I

Posted by Briana on Sun, 04/15/2018 - 14:31

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